I hit a wall with this one. And because I find it hard to let go of things I decided to sub it and see how it did and then leave it for a few years untill my brain cooled down! Now hopefully I can work on some other ideas I've got without this getting in the way.

neto perspective! aren't vanishing points great?

Yellow

Maybe without the grid lines so it looks like they're flying out of your chest. On the yellow it looks like it's coming from the heart so you could do all sorts of cozy things with that, if you like cozy. I'm not into that but this needs something, it's just a little dull right now.

i love this! on yellow, to the side

The design is cool but I don't like any of the colors

the "off to the side" one is best... i wish it was on sagestone or gray though... nice clean design, i like it!

cool design