I hit a wall with this one. And because I find it hard to let go of things I decided to sub it and see how it did and then leave it for a few years untill my brain cooled down! Now hopefully I can work on some other ideas I've got without this getting in the way.
Maybe without the grid lines so it looks like they're flying out of your chest. On the yellow it looks like it's coming from the heart so you could do all sorts of cozy things with that, if you like cozy. I'm not into that but this needs something, it's just a little dull right now.
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