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People who see the shirt will read the words top to bottom. They guy also looks really strange. If he were made in a more pencil-drawn style then it would be much more interesting.
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dang, this is bombin fast. perhaps i should stick with more design esq stuff, my cartoony stuff tends to not be very popular in the voting.
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It's a good illustration, but the text is sort of confusing cause I also read it from top to bottom. I do like the text, you just might wanna figure out a way to way it less confusing.
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i like this a lot too i agree with amandamanda with the face being kinda spooky but other wise great illustration
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heh, he floated out of his shoes. but yeah i agree with others about the text confusion. i like your cartoon style, though.
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if you made the chair one of those horrible chairdesks from high school, it would be much better. I love that the shoes were left behind.
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About my design
copy and paste this to see the design larger
http://s76.photobucket.com/albums/j11/special_dave/wishful%20thinking/?action=view¤t=WishfulThinkingpreview.jpg
hope you likey!