Threadless T-Shirts - birds of a feather

birds of a feather by coidesign

Scoring finished:

405 days ago

Submitted on:

Jul 06 '07

Scored by:

2,516 people

Comments:

35 comments

Final average score:

2.22 out of 5

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I hope you all enjoy this one!!
Shown on chocolate & white shirts.

cyniche on Jul 06 '07

eeee! It's adorable!

FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 06 '07

I dig this concept, but the illo might need to be a bit bigger and more detailed. From far away, it looks like pieces of dust or mold are attached to a feather. Maybe make the feather more flowery ans the birds more detailed, at least with a few singing notes to get the point across better? Nice start tho.

WanderingBert on Jul 06 '07

I agree with FrickinAwesome. You could try making it bigger and having a side placement also.

tashbug on Jul 06 '07

definitely. love the concept though xD

rjnotts on Jul 06 '07

oh it's lovely. If one of them was singing a note i'd be a very happy girl!

Henrik46 on Jul 06 '07

In Norwegian, we have another proverb that reads "One feather turns into five hens". It means that a rumour can turn something insignificant into a something really big. Sort of a lie accumulating.

bloatbugjen on Jul 06 '07

it looks kinda blatant with the placement... maybe tilt it diagonally a little?

Gillespy on Jul 06 '07

I second the idea of a lower, diagonal placement.

wicked-studios on Jul 06 '07

Lovin' it on chocolate. I third different placement.

coidesign on Jul 06 '07

I had this in Critique for about 2 weeks - I wish more people would stop by. :)
Thanks for the comments!

heather225 on Jul 06 '07

I love it on the chocolate color!

Christoph Jenkins on Jul 06 '07

I still love this design. both colors are great, but I'd prefer a side placement for this.

5$ nyway!

tropicaldreamx3 on Jul 06 '07

Side placement- I agree with that. Great design though. $5!

plush2you on Jul 06 '07

i'm dying from cuteness overload. 5$

jimmytan on Jul 06 '07

haha like the idea~

redlinewk on Jul 07 '07

They already had a large feather design printed.

tobasco on Jul 07 '07

Yah. No one vists critiques. I try to do heaps every now and again, much like when I score but it's harder than scoring cause you need to explain what you like and don't like, which takes time.

This is sweet. I would dig the side placement but as it is it's a 4!

orwell on Jul 07 '07

for some reason i tend to like designs with feathers...and the birds are adorable! $5

mnsany on Jul 07 '07

Side placement and I like it on white

pudge_monster on Jul 07 '07

nice concept. placement seems a little off.

ragendem on Jul 08 '07

$5, ahh yea

vaisganar on Jul 09 '07

I'm really digging this design!! I love feathers and the little birdies... nice!! Keep it rockin' ;)

Willish on Jul 09 '07

I wish the feather was reversed, as if falling down like gravity would have it.
Its a cute concept though. Unique representation too.

Moniquita on Jul 09 '07

GREAT DESIGN IN BOTH COLORS!!! I would definitely buy it!!!

lespiagge on Jul 09 '07

$5!!

mst3kfc on Jul 09 '07

Awesome idea...very adorable! $5!

kenbo on Jul 09 '07

I'd like the placement a little more left off center, but the design is sweeter than a Kool Aid binge!

Simon Cowell on Jul 10 '07

This is a nice design. I think that it's got to be off center like other have said, and it shouldn't be so straight up and down, have the feather tilting a bit so the design will really pop at you.

AllThreePartsOfMe on Jul 10 '07

I love this, but how about pink birds on the brown shirt?
Worthy of a five anyways.