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eeee! It's adorable!
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 06 '07 I dig this concept, but the illo might need to be a bit bigger and more detailed. From far away, it looks like pieces of dust or mold are attached to a feather. Maybe make the feather more flowery ans the birds more detailed, at least with a few singing notes to get the point across better? Nice start tho.
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WanderingBert on Jul 06 '07 I agree with FrickinAwesome. You could try making it bigger and having a side placement also.
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definitely. love the concept though xD
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oh it's lovely. If one of them was singing a note i'd be a very happy girl!
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In Norwegian, we have another proverb that reads "One feather turns into five hens". It means that a rumour can turn something insignificant into a something really big. Sort of a lie accumulating.
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it looks kinda blatant with the placement... maybe tilt it diagonally a little?
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I second the idea of a lower, diagonal placement.
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Lovin' it on chocolate. I third different placement.
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I had this in Critique for about 2 weeks - I wish more people would stop by. :)
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I love it on the chocolate color!
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I still love this design. both colors are great, but I'd prefer a side placement for this.
5$ nyway! |
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Side placement- I agree with that. Great design though. $5!
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i'm dying from cuteness overload. 5$
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jimmytan on Jul 06 '07 haha like the idea~
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They already had a large feather design printed.
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Yah. No one vists critiques. I try to do heaps every now and again, much like when I score but it's harder than scoring cause you need to explain what you like and don't like, which takes time.
This is sweet. I would dig the side placement but as it is it's a 4! |
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for some reason i tend to like designs with feathers...and the birds are adorable! $5
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Side placement and I like it on white
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nice concept. placement seems a little off.
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$5, ahh yea
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I'm really digging this design!! I love feathers and the little birdies... nice!! Keep it rockin' ;)
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I wish the feather was reversed, as if falling down like gravity would have it.
Its a cute concept though. Unique representation too. |
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GREAT DESIGN IN BOTH COLORS!!! I would definitely buy it!!!
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$5!!
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Awesome idea...very adorable! $5!
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I'd like the placement a little more left off center, but the design is sweeter than a Kool Aid binge!
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This is a nice design. I think that it's got to be off center like other have said, and it shouldn't be so straight up and down, have the feather tilting a bit so the design will really pop at you.
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I love this, but how about pink birds on the brown shirt?
Worthy of a five anyways. |
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$5
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I love the birds, but the feather is in an awkward position, maybe tilt it or something.
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really cute
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soooo cute!
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i looooooooooove it!
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