This is my first design, I feel it's nice, simple, cute and funny.

oh, my goodness.
since it's your first submission, I should write something encouraging.




I think I'll have to leave that to the next person.

no

well...no matter what keep submitting designs it's the only way you will get better

Cute! but terribly boring.
you should have at least put it on a bright colored shirt.

I like it.

The good news is, your next shirt with all certainty will be an improvement.

Try Critique.

First 0 I have given in a while. Sorry, but you are going to have to exert much more effort if you want to get a good score. Spend some time thinking of a really good concept and put your artistic skills to work to achieve it.

yes, effort is what this needs.

Do keep trying, though!

Ha, cute.

I know what you guys say about getting a concept and putting effort in but i went through a lot of designs before I settled on this one. I just wanted to give some character to the actually T-shirt, try give it a personality and I felt that having it this simple worked well, I guess you people don't.

simple, but not simplistic. keep it up though, the idea will find you.

Rezter on Jul 01 '07
This is my first design, I feel it's nice, (well, technically it's kind of frightening with nonsensical upper and lower case letters) simple (we DEF agree on that point) cute (if you find seemingly random faces grimacing in pain cute) and funny. (for all the wrong reasons tho, I'm afraid).

Zero for this design my man. If this is the one you took a long time to think about subbing and did, i'd trash the rest of the ones you were looking at and start over. Good luck with a design that looks like you didn't do it while sleepwalking.

It's more of fear than pain, the concept was that the T-shirt was afraid of the wearer be it by ugliness or just awesomeness.

i subed something just like this and it got denied.

I'd Buy it!

um, lose the text?