Looks too scratchy.. I'm not crazy about the placement.

It's a nice design though.
I like the grey background best.

Agree on the placement comment too.

I like it at the bottom, but perhaps centered.

I like the style on this as well! I would love to see some more experimentation with the stripes and laying a solid figure in front of them or something. *thumbs up*

I think this is a pretty neat design overall.

The last white ray on the bottom could be removed and it would make the design seem less "square".

I think I'd definitely buy it if that last ray were removed and maybe if it had a center chest placement.