I like the style and design a lot, but something about it just seems a little toooo simple. Maybe elaborate a little? 4

The lines look unintentionally sketchy... like it's unfinished.

If I could draw I could buy a 3-pack of white Hanes t's and a Sharpie and make these for cheap. I like the idea of her being enveloped/hugged by the music but Ladykat is right, this looks unfinished.

Make me think of that Foo Fighters video where DG has the big ass hands.

I would have done the critique as well

some of the music notes are backwards. and if there's one thing i (and most musically-inclined people) can't stand, it's backwards notes.

fix that pleeeeeeease. otherwise, i like the design~

This looks like a first sketch, not a finished shirt. Critique will help you work this idea to a point where it's much more likely to score well and be printed.

Thanks for the comments everyone (:
It's my first submission so I was just excited to turn something in. I'll do a critique first next time .
Some of the notes are backwards because his arm is turned that way.. I didn't think it'd make sense to have them go the other (correct) way.
Thanks, though

I like the design~ 5

I really like the concept, but agree that it needs... something. If you leave it Black on White the lines need to be more calligraphic. It would look good on a colored shirt if you just thickened them some. Otherwise awesome!

color

This doesn't look like a finished design to me. It looks more like a concept drawing done before the actual drawing is started or something.

nice, but needs color. no gusta white.

really incredible design, but needs color.

This looks like a shirt I would wear with no paints on and my nuts are slapping up against the girls face in the design and I go to jail when the neighbors kids see me doing this.