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 This won't be printed. It's the earth with some nice quotes about unity and peace and whatnot.
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What the hell? If you're so sure this won't be printed, why did you even submit? What a waste of time for the rest of us if you really believe that...
Anyway. This is a cool concept, but probably better as a poster than a shirt (hard to read all the quotes when it's on a person, you know?). |
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Joelnz on Jul 05 '07 the text needs a lot of refining
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actually, it's nice to look at, it's one of the nicer shirts i've seen, honestly, on this site, it's not some silly little drawing trying to be a clever idea, it's visually attractive. 4
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i actually really like it
maybe on white though $5 |
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and why would this not be printed?
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clarification post: this was originally a concept for a mural that I did on a 6x6 wall. I did it on a piece of paper about 8x11 and photoshopped it into over 500 shape layers of awesomeness. The patron liked it, so I then ended up painting it.
I just decided "oh what the hell, I'll submit this to Threadless". My last couple of submissions were a lot better, but not a single one made it, so I just suspected that it wouldn't make it. Well what do you know, it did. |
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i like it but i'd want it to be smaller on the shirt. $5
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If your stuff is being rejected before it gets posted here, it's probably a size or number of colors issue, not something to do with the content or style. Upload that stuff to Critiques and people will tell you what rule you're breaking.
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yeah, I didn't break a single rule. I made sure it was the right filetype, only 4-5 colors (most cases 3), had the proper thumbnail size/filetype, etc. I think it might have had something to do with me being only 16 at the time, but that's just nonsense.
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gee, arent we negative! I like the idea, the text looks like it could use a bit of tweaking, but re-do and re-sub if this doesnt make it.
I agree that it would look better smaller on the tee. |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 06 '07 Mjoo is the king/queen of the critiques support! And im not gonna give you a higher score for the pity party you are trying to create with your statements! lol. Not a bad idea, it just isn't very eye pleasing or easy to read at this point.
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Great idea... type needs a little refining.
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good concept.
i agree, work on the text, but it might have a shot. |
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mjoo is rough! How much time was wasted for you? Two seconds? Be a little kinder.
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Oh for crying out loud! All I'm saying is that people who think their work is terrible shouldn't bother submitting. Since I thought the designer just said that to get pity from voters, I offered him my opinion of his work anyway. Giving valuable advice on where to go next with a design is the most valuable commentary I can give a designer, and I think it's worth a lot more than randomly attacking other posters (Don't you think, yarmouth? You gave nothing to this guy!).
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How sad it must be when even your creator doesn't love you. |
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ok,. clarification post #27
This was an example for a client. I just thought "what the hell" and submitted it. I've submitted about 7 other designs (all much better/cleaner and rule following) that never made it, thus I didn't think it would make it. So much drama for such a little tiny thing. it won't win, I know that, and didn't think it would even make it to competition. That's why I said it wouldn't win, I never though anyone would be able to vote on it. |
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Neil, shut up and let people make their own opinion.
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Emilio, stop making fun of me :[
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I'm not making fun of you, I'm making fun of your tendency to doubt yourself like a 12 year-old girl
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haha.
lol. |
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@ the last comment sorry. not you.
I kinda like this, just wouldnt wear it. I like the idea kinda. but not the text, hard to read. |
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meh, didn't like it on your deviantart and i certainly wouldn't wear it
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I don't care. I love it. It makes me feel happy. $5.
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nice design, but on a different colour?
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It is attractive. I wish the font was clearer.
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this is a cool t... if it wins it better be printed( haha dont be like a 12 yr old girl =] )... 5$! i would wear it!
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i certainly love it and would wear it. *crosses fingers* it better win.
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Hmm... too intricate for a shirt, I think.
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When your right your right.Next.
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the font is kinda hard to read. and the design is kinda big for my liking. but overall i'd buy it
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I love it, but I don't like whiny sad sacks. I'm struggling to give you the high score you deserve. . . .
(I read the comments to see what was already said about my critique: I like the text style, but agree that it is too difficult to read) |
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looks like a 70's shirt
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Smaller, but it definitely makes a statement. I'd buy it.
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No england on it, major flaw!
And I dont go in for 'statement' shirts. But lots of people do I guess. |
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get rid of all the text. just kidding I like the concept it need a little something though
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I really like it. $5
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I'm not sure I'd wear this, but I do like it. The quotes are nice.
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