sandwich vs. poem
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1787 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 05 '07
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1.61 from 715 votes
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i love mark strand
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The execution could have been better -- "sandwich versus poem" does not make sense as the image is a "poem sandwich." It would be better to use the Strand quote.
In addition, I would have lines from popular/favorite poems in the sandwich rather than random words. For color suggestions, Kuler and ColorBlender can be of great help. |
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i agree with fouchnickens
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I think this is wicked
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Thanks guys! The comments help. They're not actually random words, but words from one of my poems (I'm not exactly famous but I'm kinda well known -- google me). I'm not sure how I would feel about using someone else's words -- that would feel like stealing. But that might be an improvement.
I was trying to convey that the sandwich won the poem vs. sandwich battle -- perhaps I should use another sort of image? Any suggestions for colors? I am going to try that link. |
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Five!
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christinehamm, if you are unsure of a design, submit your idea to critique first, which allows you to receive feedback without going into the actual voting stage -- it is usually frowned upon to resubmit designs to competition unless substantial changes are made.
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I'm not unsure; I'm trying to be polite and invite comments. Sorry if my tone is off.
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That's some Tshirt!
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5, your tone is perfect.
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the idea is good but the execution is a little off. and the white on black for this particular design is a bit bland. with a little tweaking it could be interesting.
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