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Jul 05 '07
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1.84 out of 5
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Inspired by the craze of the 80's, jazzercise, I thought the flowers might want to have some fun too.
Christoph Jenkins
Christoph Jenkins on Jul 05 '07
the flowers look way too copy and pasted. nice concept though.
ruby soho
ruby soho on Jul 05 '07
Yeah, maybe change each flower up a little more.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Jul 05 '07
well... they're supposed to be in an aerobics class, so they're all doing the same movement.
Oopis
Oopis on Jul 05 '07
Maybe on a kid's shirt.
howlingmaniac
howlingmaniac on Jul 05 '07
Yes, they are all in an aerobics class...but that doesn't really apply...if they were a bunch of PEOPLE in an aerobics class, they wouldn't look exactly the same as each other...It's fine that they are doing the same motion, but make them each look like their own characters. Great concept.
jet1125
jet1125 on Jul 05 '07
I like how they look and they all have different expressions.
ruby soho
ruby soho on Jul 05 '07
Well yes, but each petal on every flower is exactly the same, each of their leaves and stems are exactly the same. I do like the one that's bent over and sweating, but the others are boring cause they're all the same. It is a great concept but everything down to the sweat drops and sweat bands are the same which is just not cool.
nellebabe
nellebabe on Jul 05 '07
Is that one dead? because that makes me laugh
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Jul 05 '07
umm. the sweat drops and the headbands are actually different. i mean, i see what you're saying, and i'll probably go and rework it thanks to the comments, but please be accurate when saying stuff about the work. thanks.
amandamanda
amandamanda on Jul 05 '07
I, for one, like it
It's funny, and witty!
I could see it as a great kids tee. And what the heck, I'd buy it too!
tobasco
tobasco on Jul 05 '07
have one going the other way and looking embarassed. This is a cool concept but I agree about the copy and paste feel. keep at it though.
ruby soho
ruby soho on Jul 06 '07
Well, with the headbands they could be different colors. And the sweat drops still look all the same to me so I do believe my comments were accurate. You don't have to be defensive, it's just some constructive criticism so you can improve the design. :-)
squint
squint on Jul 06 '07
this is adorable! i would buy it! :D
yirracurls
yirracurls on Jul 06 '07
i LOVE this... a lot, actually
FRICKINAWESOME
FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 06 '07
Funny idea...just listen to some of the other people who gavr you ideas on how to vary the drawing up. Also refine each flower a bit more andthis is a kid's print winner fo' sho'.
whatarebirds
whatarebirds on Jul 07 '07
Love what you've done with it, WhitneyBeth!

There have been some good additional suggestions so far, but it's going the right way I think.
ntlsteven
ntlsteven on Jul 08 '07
this cracks me up
DoubleTake
DoubleTake on Jul 09 '07
I love it! Definately better on light blue tho...
Trav_b
Trav_b on Jul 09 '07
rename it photosythn-ER-cise, and i'll buy it. just a suggestion.
Hero Status
Hero Status on Jul 10 '07
this is clever. 5.

jessiedoll61
jessiedoll61 on Jul 10 '07
awwwwwhhhh soo cute. i love it! 5!!!!
Kookaberry
Kookaberry on Jul 11 '07
I do agree with the others about varying the positions of the flowers. Their "arms" coud be held at slightly different angles and their "faces" could be not all appearing to look straight ahead. The tired one is hilarious. Use that concept of variation on all the flowers. It's a great concept and just needs a little work. I think the sweatbands look fine but I think the sweat drops could look hand done in the same way.
raxotoxin
raxotoxin on Jul 11 '07
very cute. agree with kookaberry.
WhitneyBeth
   WhitneyBeth on Jul 12 '07
thanks for all the helpful comments, guys. i'm definitely going to take those into consideration. 1.84 isn't too great.... but i think i might put some more work into it and resub if i can get it to a point where i'm really satisfied with it. :-)
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