Photosynth-e-cise!
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1787 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 05 '07
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24 comments
Average score:
1.84 from 2,500 votes
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the flowers look way too copy and pasted. nice concept though.
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Yeah, maybe change each flower up a little more.
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WhitneyBeth on Jul 05 '07 well... they're supposed to be in an aerobics class, so they're all doing the same movement.
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Maybe on a kid's shirt.
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Yes, they are all in an aerobics class...but that doesn't really apply...if they were a bunch of PEOPLE in an aerobics class, they wouldn't look exactly the same as each other...It's fine that they are doing the same motion, but make them each look like their own characters. Great concept.
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I like how they look and they all have different expressions.
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Well yes, but each petal on every flower is exactly the same, each of their leaves and stems are exactly the same. I do like the one that's bent over and sweating, but the others are boring cause they're all the same. It is a great concept but everything down to the sweat drops and sweat bands are the same which is just not cool.
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Is that one dead? because that makes me laugh
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WhitneyBeth on Jul 05 '07 umm. the sweat drops and the headbands are actually different. i mean, i see what you're saying, and i'll probably go and rework it thanks to the comments, but please be accurate when saying stuff about the work. thanks.
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I, for one, like it
It's funny, and witty! I could see it as a great kids tee. And what the heck, I'd buy it too! |
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have one going the other way and looking embarassed. This is a cool concept but I agree about the copy and paste feel. keep at it though.
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Well, with the headbands they could be different colors. And the sweat drops still look all the same to me so I do believe my comments were accurate. You don't have to be defensive, it's just some constructive criticism so you can improve the design. :-)
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this is adorable! i would buy it! :D
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i LOVE this... a lot, actually
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 06 '07 Funny idea...just listen to some of the other people who gavr you ideas on how to vary the drawing up. Also refine each flower a bit more andthis is a kid's print winner fo' sho'.
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Love what you've done with it, WhitneyBeth!
There have been some good additional suggestions so far, but it's going the right way I think. |
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this cracks me up
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I love it! Definately better on light blue tho...
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rename it photosythn-ER-cise, and i'll buy it. just a suggestion.
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this is clever. 5.
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awwwwwhhhh soo cute. i love it! 5!!!!
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Kookaberry on Jul 11 '07 I do agree with the others about varying the positions of the flowers. Their "arms" coud be held at slightly different angles and their "faces" could be not all appearing to look straight ahead. The tired one is hilarious. Use that concept of variation on all the flowers. It's a great concept and just needs a little work. I think the sweatbands look fine but I think the sweat drops could look hand done in the same way.
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very cute. agree with kookaberry.
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WhitneyBeth on Jul 12 '07 thanks for all the helpful comments, guys. i'm definitely going to take those into consideration. 1.84 isn't too great.... but i think i might put some more work into it and resub if i can get it to a point where i'm really satisfied with it. :-)
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