Threadless T-Shirts - The First Kiss...

The First Kiss...

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fade2red
on Jun 28 '07

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Average score:

1.85 out of 5

Number scored:

2,261 people

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318 days ago

Comments:

66 comments

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cha-lay on Jun 28 '07

haha, cute. but i don't like the color so much.

fade2red on Jun 28 '07

thx, i shoulda put other shirt colors up. i went with pink cuz its a "love" color lol.

ninjapiratesrock on Jun 28 '07

Haha. This makes me giggle 'cause it's true. :]

iwantedanothernick on Jun 28 '07

ahahahahahhahah..really true!!!!

kissmeimshitfaced on Jun 28 '07

I don't like the bubbles, the shape or the black lining, its such an awesome idea otherwise!!

BabyBlues on Jun 28 '07

ahhhh how romantic and skanky

fade2red on Jun 28 '07

ps.
i want to see this movie so bad, and the damn thing isnt showing in Az, oh well there is always dvd lol.

Sodacap_bum on Jun 28 '07

=\

i think i'd just like the two little kids. im not too crazy about the thought bubbles.

Rebe-chan on Jun 28 '07

i like the concept but not really much the realization :\ Anyway it's nice

jaz853 on Jun 28 '07

Looks like a Roschart Ink Blot test. I don't mean that as a compliment. The images need to be better defined.

Krhembree on Jun 28 '07

PIMP, I LIKE IT!

andreaV on Jun 28 '07

$5 HAHA it so true. love it and can't wait to buy it!!

hyperappart on Jun 28 '07

may be the thought bubble should be more "thoughty" and less "circly"

NudistInDisguise on Jun 28 '07

i LOVE THE BLACK! But its a little hard to tell what the things in the bubbles are, if they were a bit clearer itd be a lot better. Nice though!

XXJUSTAGIRL88XX on Jun 28 '07

Im not sure I like the thought bubbles at all, the picture is so cute without them, but the humor is lost without them so I agree with the idea of more "thoughty" bubbles.

jet1125 on Jun 28 '07

I know the concept that you were going for requires the thought bubbles, but they just don't work with the pictures. Besides that's probably not what would be running through their minds at that age. I'd get the shirt if it just had the kids on it.

Bwoh0525 on Jun 28 '07

That boy is moving quick for such a young age. but the concept does have some truth to it. haha

fade2red on Jun 28 '07

thx for all comments, ya the kids look a lil young but they just represent a "boy" and a "girl" not the age but the genders and our different thoughts.

DrVSP on Jun 28 '07

i may be being thick, but what is the girl thinking of? I can see the boy's bed, but all see on the left is a blob thing.

SenselessFrantic on Jun 28 '07

5$!

staffell on Jun 28 '07

the diesn is pretty rubbish

chelly on Jun 28 '07

that's pretty gross considering that they are kids.

cronobeaker on Jun 28 '07

Sorry but the idea is just a little too wrong for their ages and the image quality is just a little too unfinished for my liking.

Bwoh0525 on Jun 28 '07

The girl seems to be thinking of love, as shown by what appears to be the "precious moment" statue in her bubble.

lylith on Jun 28 '07

On a dark gray or purple, but not on pink.

rockstar5785 on Jun 28 '07

love the idea!

appledelighht on Jun 28 '07

make mine med! 5!

I like cookies on Jun 28 '07

Without the thought bubbles I'd give it a 5 but with the thought bubbles I give it a 2. It could have been so cute...

Midnighteskye on Jun 29 '07

I like the concept but I think it needs more details and be just a little more defined. It took me a little bit to figure out what I was looking at. Very cute idea though and I think pink is a good color choice!

Miffsible on Jun 29 '07

jet: "Besides that's probably not what would be running through their minds at that age."

Jet you seem to have a habit of completely missing the point. Most shirts on Threadless aren't supposed to be taken literally

ShirtJunkie on Jun 29 '07

No dude would picture that bed.
That bed is so gay.

Seriously, he'd be picturing a mattress and a box spring with no top sheet, some smacky pillows and a wrinkly tore up bedspread.

Anyway. Just sayin'.

whirzle1 on Jun 29 '07

not good. you totally autotraced 3 random pictures, one of which is copyrighted. The image styles are horrible unrelated.

...and it's on a pink shirt.

It's also a pretty creepy message considering the age of the kids.

Prediction: 1.18

BrandonB11 on Jun 30 '07

^^^ agreed

its quite horrible

kingforaday on Jun 30 '07

yeah i thought ive seen the 2 kids on a card or somthing

not cool

eille08 on Jun 30 '07

eiiick it's like those creepy black and white babies makin' babies cards at the hallmark store

Donk10k on Jun 30 '07

I like the idea. I think that it's true, even at that age. I just can't figure out what the girls thought bubble is supposed to be showing.

fade2red on Jun 30 '07

bride and groom.

Chapsticked on Jul 01 '07

I think it's funny-But I think that I would like the shirt a whole lot better if the thought bubbles weren't there. And maybe if it were a different color? Pink is just so...pink. Ya know what I mean?

ourgodis_n_asmgod on Jul 01 '07

i like it but i wish the boys little bubble thing was different i wish the boy and the girl bubble were the same both wanting to get married i dont respect the boys always think about sex cause they dont! so ya but i love the silluette

ilikeice on Jul 01 '07

I don't like the stereotypes. In my relationships, I am always trying to get the boy in bed with me, while he is always about staying together. I hate the stereotype that all girls just wanna get married 'cause we DON'T!!!!

tropicaldreamx3 on Jul 01 '07

Haha I love it! Geesh...calm down people! Stereotypes in t-shirts aren't always pro. I think it's very cute! And kinda true. I would so wear it! 5$!

fade2red on Jul 01 '07

thx tropical.

CheesecakeBree on Jul 01 '07

I don't really like the concept nor the illustration style. The thought bubbles are very poorly done... as is the rest of it, to be brutally honest. I couldn't even tell what was in the girl's thought bubbled until I read the comments. Sorry, but this is a zero by my Threadless standards. Better luck next time.

FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 02 '07

Am i the only one REALLY creeped out that an eight-year-old kid is thinking of doing stuff with this young girl that would be considered crazy in the sickest of rap strip club videos? Badly composed and executed...plus any person who i saw wearing this tee would immediately make me notify all elementary schools in a two mile radius and alert them of this perv's presence.

fade2red on Jul 02 '07

wow, guess no one reads my comments, so i shall repeat myself.

"not the age of the kids, i am just showing a girl, and a boy, not the age but the genders"

not saying young kids want sex, just the difference between gender thought process.

damn.

Flippinheck on Jul 02 '07

wow, guess no one reads my comments, so i shall repeat myself.

It doesn't matter what YOU intended - what matters is what's on the shirt. Nobody here wants to walk around telling people "I know it looks like this 8 year old boy is thinking of having sex with this 8 year old girl, but that's not what it's supposed to be!"

If you're not able to communicate your idea, then you've failed as a designer.

That said, I don't see this as being fatal. Just draw adults. And while we're at it, choose a better icon for the girl's bubble. Maybe just a heart. And try harder to make the bubbles look good. The ones you've got now are just lazy.

www.munchart.com on Jul 02 '07

Reminds me of my first kiss!

pairoffairies on Jul 02 '07

Nice concept, work on the execution. Not so dark and more detailed. The Hummel figures don't work for me. Maybe something that looks more like a wedding cake topper or a bride, or a couple holding hands. . . .

Zebdog on Jul 02 '07

haha this was me when i was like 2 or 3 but i'd take it in a different color please

lemon of pink on Jul 02 '07

i've seen this concept many times before, and i've been annoyed by it every time.

fade2red on Jul 03 '07

ur mom annoys me lemon, yet i keep seeing her.

BrandonB11 on Jul 03 '07

^^^just the kind of comment u would expect from somoen that made a design like this...

0!!!

supersonic39 on Jul 03 '07

i think it would be better if they were teenagers

Chelle Belle on Jul 03 '07

Yeah, teens would be better. I could tell what the girl was thinking of, but a little less "precious moments"-y would be better.

letIt on Jul 03 '07

That is super adorable. I kinda want it. I would take it in this color

AntBoy on Jul 03 '07

terrific. not crazy about the color, but i love the design

andreaV on Jul 03 '07

eventually they will be thinking this so put a condom in the boys hand so they can have safe sex! make it a xs on though lol

kevister7 on Jul 03 '07

I can't tell what the heck is going on in the upper left hand corner

daymonthyear on Jul 04 '07

Tired idea, poor execution.

sultry on Jul 04 '07

They had screenings all over the place in AZ! I just saw it on Monday.
Adorable.

mezo on Jul 04 '07

Not only is this an ugly design (those strange dark cut out shapes are hard to recognize...ESPECIALLY the weird skeleton-like blobs in the thought bubble on the left). But your concept is in the toilet. Trying to merge a subtle sex message in with a visual illustration of children is gross. 0

andreaV on Jul 04 '07

fuck you mezo and everyong else who fails to see its not the children it a male and female. damn i was a lil girl once and oh guess what a lil boy grew up and fucked me! oh no!

andreaV on Jul 04 '07

i hope this wins so i can buy it and wear it to a daycare or for that matter anywhere i go! i'll but this in XS for my friends baby too