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I love that, and I'm surprised I would too because I typically don't like just-illustrated pictures. But the re-positioning made a lot of difference. Sweet deal.
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after reading the way you critique other peoples work, am quite suprised at this entry?
expected something with a bit of talent. maybe you should take some of your own advice? just a suggestion. |
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I think it's dis-tasteful (although I don't always mind that)
clever - no arrogant - yes I guess I'm OK with it, but never would I wear it |
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yea, it does take a certain type of person to wear it :) and people looked at me weird when i said i would wear it.. but no, screw it. im gonna wear it. just not to work ;)
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I like the image but not the text. Its just like. i dunno. not art enough? its an illustration of the text but where's the art the cumming over?
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for a start its not centred on the shirt. The lady isnt strong enough to balance the design. Its big and its clumsy and overall the design is tasteless.
minimalistic clutter_ |
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Actually I did look at your webpage before and I loved some of your stuff. I really liked the package design. Thanks for understanding, comments always welcome.
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