Scoring finished:
465 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 27 '07
Scored by:
2,160 people
Comments:
32 comments
Final average score:
1.94 out of 5
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well done. good concept. my only gripe is the smoke doesn't quite look like ...smoke. It looks like a half melted candle. 4!
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maybe move the commander a little further away from the line of fire - not that he's in it now, but he's pretty close
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^^ Having 'One last cigarette' is a pretty classic request of those about to be executed and has been in numerous movies as well.
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It's punderful! I agree about the smoke. Maybe just make it lines instead of filling it in with green.
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If this shirt were a dude, I'd date it. And at the end of said date, we'd both have a cigarette. And I don't even smoke. That's how sexy this shirt is.
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Put the cigarette coming out of the other side of the mouth so the smoke doesn't hide part of the egg's face. And make the smoke have more flow instead of just looking like a drawn out cotton ball.
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There's something strange about the eyes... or face... and the smoke doesn't help by obscuring it more. This has potential but I'm also unwilling to wear something remotely to do with cigarettes.
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Those riflemen standing in the back row are gonna get fucked proper by the backblast from those bazookas...
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