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My second design and I like the oddness and how unstraight it is...
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I'm not sure I understand. It looks like you were going somewhere with it, but then said "aw what the heck, I'll flip it upside down."
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the upside-down was not a good design choice. I would prefer this rightside up but still at an angle and restructure the text. Or add some thing more visual to infer Identity Theft and lose the text.
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sound and hearing is not the only sense involved in true sensual music. I would like something more for this Cornelius competition. Otherwise its very pretty.
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Needs some work. Everyone's already talked about the upside down thing.
I think you could convey this message with just art alone. Work on the execution and lose the text. Not a bad start, though. :] |
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I get it in thatthey are all the same, so that's the identity "theft," I suppose. What I don't understand, nor like, is that they are upside down. There is just something annoying about it :/
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