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I really like it, but as I've said in the critiques, the red and black line of dots on his chest doesn't feel right. It seems to round in the wrong angle.
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i saw the pic from the comic con. the guy did an awesome job on the costume. this shirt design seems to not do it justice. the graphics need cleaned up some.
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yeah, whatever and maybe ill try to do the concept justice myself. but ill prolly try and make it more dynamic
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Hmmmm, you have a spelling mistake. For it to be storm, it has to be ストーム, otherwise it would make no sense. It's a pity since the design is so nice for my eyes :(.
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It's half grammar, half aesthetics. It's phonetically correct (su-to-mu-ra-i). I liked the look the look of these 5 characters.
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The chest symbol can be removed if there are copyright issues.