Let the Music Flow from You.
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Jun 21 '07
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i like except her nail & hand look a bit manly. 4
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i dig this. i'd dig this even more not on white! 5
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I love how you're accenting with the red. That's so darn cute!
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Wow, this is amazing! Keep up the awesome work, I'm so buying this 5$
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That's just ugly.
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Awesome! I'd buy it! 4$
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maybe make it so the music isnt so...straight..like make it wavy and not end so sharply
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^Agree with Gnomes, the music should flow a little. It's pretty cool though.
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Make the music flow a little, so that it isn't so stick straight. Lovely design.
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It's just too 80s for me. I don't like that Nagel look anymore.
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damn treble clef... bass clef needs love too yo
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This reminds me of Meg White from theWhite Stripes. They have some sort of fetish with red,white and black, because theyre just about the only colours you see them wearing. HA!
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this is awesome! but i think the music staff should come out a little more wavy.
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i hate the colors.. cool idea though.
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Thank you to the people who like my design or people who are giving me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
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music needs to flow, and make it go across the tee more. Look at using different colours, good idea though, good placement.
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I like it a lot but like what a lot of people are saying i think the music notes should be wavy
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i agree. the notes should be wavy otherwise it just looks like the lady is just shooting stuff out which would be the opposite of the title.
other than that. i like the idea. |
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I like the idea, but the execution isn't as good as it could be. let the bubble blower and notes be wavy (as everyone seems to agree) and her skin tone is a little sickly. give her a little more dimension and color.
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I agree with wavy, too. Sub to critiques next time and you might get a print!
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cool idea, but like most people have said, make the music notes be wavy. and maybe a bit longer too. like going across the shirt.
good job |
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I like the concept. I think it's worth playing around with
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That one note you have without a stem doesnt exist... put a stem on it or hollow it out :P...
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This could be amazing if the music (as others have pointed out) wasn't so straight and the lines weren't so sharp...
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plain, have seen similiar designs but i like the idea
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nice idea, but the girl needs to be a little more, "playful and happy" the music should be more not prefect.
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This is exactly what I'm looking for,
but....... I think the music staff would look better wavy . |
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yeah, i agree, the music should look more loose, not so sharp and straighy
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I love the idea, but the music should come out more flowy
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Sensuous?
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yes, if we could actually take a look at it, that might be nice.
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It needs a ton of work.
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What gnomes said, make the music lines less harsh and rigid, and maybe put it on a different color tee? I like it, but white doesn't like my pale Irish features.
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i think i'd like it better if the girl's hand wasn't so manly and then notes were sorta wavy.
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I love it how the girl isn't "model gorgeous."
She's pretty, but not stunning. And I like the manly hand. 5 |
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I second the general sentiment that the music should be more wavy/"flowy", and you should also try using different colors; maybe an all-blue or all-red/pink monochromatic scheme on either the same or a complimentary-colored shirt? Also, her neck is kind of long, her jaw is too square, and her earlobe is kind of wonky. The bubble wand could use fixing up, too--and also, her ring looks weird (it was hard to figure out what it was at first); it's not necessary, so I'd lose it. However, you've got a good idea here--I definitely like the concept, and it's a good start design-wise. With some work, this design definitely has potential. ^^
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more delicate hands would work better
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I think you should just get rid of the music staff and just have the red notes there. Or black notes.
I would also recommend refining the design of the bubble ring (or whatever they're called...). The stick seems a little long. Maybe if you shortened it you could change the grip and make it less chunky. Either way, this is quite a cute design. (^_^) |
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the notes need to flow from the bubble wand, or look like they are floating away or something
just having them come straight out feels very rigid and doesnt seem to fit with the idea of letting the music flow from you but its still a cool design! i like it alot |
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the music should be more flowy $4
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I've been a huge fan of Cornelius for a while, and I think that this shirt both illustrates the kind of emotion and aesthetic that hey conveys and also a really great design. I dig it and gave it a five.
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anatomy badly needs work. I mean the ear, jesus.
also, with the placement the design would have to continue all the way around, if it just abruptly stopped on the edge of the shirt that would be ridiculous. the shading is not accurate, there is no light source so it just looks blochy, especially that...patch on her face. And what's going on with her shirt/hair in the forefront? It's...a horrible tangent and makes no visual sense. and I agree with everyone else about getting rid of the stiff lines of music and notes, make it more flowy and more like bubbles, since that's what you're making a metaphor to. |
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the pentagram is too straight
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I don't know how you would do this, but I think it would be cool if the music was sort of in different snatches, floating across the shirt--'cause you don't get just one long bubble, you get lots of little ones... But maybe that wouldn't look nice. In any case, the music ought to be more wavy.
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i really like this,
but i think it would look better if the music staff wasn't so straight. :] |
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Agreeing with MiriTiazan, if you've implemented the idea of a bubble blower then you've gotta make the music more bubbly...
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I don`t know if I even like the girl on the t-shirt. Maybe just have the bubble wand with the music coming out of it on the shirt. And I agree with just about everyone in that the music needs to be more flowing.
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Great idea, but I agree, the music needs to flow a bit.
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it's an amazing idea!!!!!!!!!! not too fond of the way it's made though. too straight and edgy
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Make the design flow more. Less straight lines, more wavy.
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I think she needs to be hotter.
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the line of notes should be more flowy, like bubbles actually are. maybe make them different sizes too
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ya, make the music kinda wavy etc.
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i agree with making the music staff and notes wavy and flowing.
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i like the idea buy the girl looks kinda hookerish
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cute but her cheeks kinda freak me out...
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It doesn't look like her hand is really holding the bubble wand.
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Make the music flow some, otherwise it is a good design.
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I agree with the flowing idea.
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8 days later
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Really cool, but I think it should be on another color. Take everyone's advice on the music notes. Think about how music sounds when it comes out. Music isn't usually just one long monotone note; if music notes literally flew out of an instrument and landed on a piece of paper, they would land in all different places on the page, some higher and some lower. It really does flow, so if you can capture that then you're golden.
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4 days later
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I love the artwork and it's location on the tee..
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