to kiss death/life
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1801 days ago
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Jun 21 '07
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1.99 from 2,335 votes
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I could barely see death's head, it blends with the circles in the moon. I actually don't think you even need the moon.
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yea, the head is like invisible, but i really like this design. 4!
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wow this is a really great drawing
not a big fan of skulls/skeletons...so i probably wouldnt wear it |
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it takes a second to see the skull. i like how its not so obvious. then you read the title and get a chill. very nice.
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make the moon that middle green maybe the skeleton will stand out more? ...i want more detail in the wings, they look unfinished
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this would make a really cool tattooo
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Whoa, I made it on the trials!! Cool. thanks on the comments..they are appreciated and helpful. I can't wait to put up a 5 design. Threadless Rocks!!
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Snoochie Bootchie!!
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I love this! It gave me chills the first time I saw it.
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i don't usually like designs with skulls and the like but i like this one for some reason...it really grabs your eye
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I like it, but i think if the wings have more detail, it will rock. Have to smaller on shirt too. Cheers!
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no moon howabout
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I think the artwork is immensely beautiful, though I am curious as to why to moon is not finnished. Maybe it is purposefully set behind Death because night (in most poetry, anyways) usually symbolizes the end of one's life.
Tis very pretty :D |
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more detail on the entire design, different color, and finish the moon.
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get rid of the moon then I'd buy it!
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took me too long to find the skeleton
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i love this drawing but i think the color is weird it doesnt suit the design...and def put it on a differt color shirt
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do some of the advice given but please please please resub it !! its amazing what ive always wanted on a tee. xxx
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Yo dawg, this is a pretty nice drawing, I just doesnt seem finished to me. I think a little more refinement needs to be put into this, and the color choices are a little dull dude. Also, that arm is way too long man. Yo got skills dawg, keep at it. I wouldnt be surprised to see you in Hollywood in the near future.
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I really like this tee! 5
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oohhh eerie...you're a great drawer!!!
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this is very nice and wouldnt wear it on a tshirt but still, its great. im gonna give it a 5 of course cos its very good. it would made a very cool tattoo. well done matchhead =]
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There's a chunk missing from the moon, I didn't even notice the skelleton until I read the note about the head...It's really a very lovely picture. I like how it has that paint brush look to it. But maybe if you use a different color for the moon then the figures. THey would pop a little more
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this is awesome obeone. . .i'de buy it
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I agree with most of the other comments, either drop the moon or add more setail to it. I too didn't pick out the skull until I had read a few comments.
Nice figures though and I like the concept. |
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fantastic
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marvelous! 5! great job~
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Edit and resub, this is really great!!
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agreed that the wings deserve more detail. i'd also like to see different color schemes.
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it would be cool if the wings could finish the rest of the moon... you know... completing its circle.
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^Ooh, I love that idea! A wing finishing the circle of the moon might make it feel a bit more polished... Regardless, your talent is evident in this design. Lovely.
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I like that they both become part of the moon and make it all one picture.
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I never thought a skeleton could be sexy before.
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Reminds me of Edvard Munch's "The Kiss Of Death." Nice work ;)
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i love it. the placement feels somehow off, but i'm not really sure how. wouldn't stop me from buying it though.
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also, what does the line below the moon say? is it a quote?
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I'm not hating this, but it looks like you have a great design that you haven't finished yet.
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Awesome, thanks for the comments!! I will make those changes and resubmit for those that dig idea of kissing death. Now that I'm excited I will submit and create some kick ass designs!! Threadless is the best idea ever for artists! the internet kicks ass!!
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Cool artwork:)
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no moon more contrast
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i think this is cool..do you have other colours?
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i love this
and i usually don't like skulls/skeletons but this...is amazing and i think it'll ruin if you finish the moon but what does the text say?? whatev, i love it :) |
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AMAZING art, but I agree that you need to a) make it a bit easier to see what's going on, maybe by increasing the contrast a bit or getting rid of the moon (though I like the moon otherwise, so it would be a shame), b) finish the moon (unless you decide to get rid of it) and c) change the colours - maybe put it on navy and have the design in light blue?
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I agree w. Morgyn - maybe put the design on navy and then have the design in a yellow/blue combo. I really like the moon - it adds something cool to the whole scene - maybe to make the skull stand out more you could shade the top of it to make it look rounder & more 3D (like her dress) and just leave the moon as is...
Awesome job. |
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Miss Haha, I like your idea. I think I will do that!! the words say "to interprete a dream"
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acually, I really like these colors....
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Eeee, please lose the text!
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necrophilia!?! Good line work though...
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It's like Corpse Bride! Cute!
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Alright. I'll lose the text and refine the shades and colors. What color shirt should it be on? Navy Blue?
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i think this is great. but i think the moon should be a little tiny tiny bit darker, so the skeleton sticks out more. otherwise, this is absolutely beautiful.
the shirt can stay green and everything else can stay... or you could make the shirt black, the moon off-white/yellow and the outline can be silver. that might be a bit much... |
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For all those that liked the design, click on the "I'd buy it" when I repost this so we can get this printed!! I am going to take your guys advice! Thanks.
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bullseye. i'd buy it
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i love it! and when you have made the changes what many have pointed out i will most defenitely buy it! great art :) !
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i really like it!
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I thought necrophilia also.
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Thanks for everyone who posted! I totally appreciate the comments and suggestions. I will be reposting this one. Hopefully it gets through next time. For those that still have suggestions, let me know. Also check out my other designs in the running!! Threadless!! Snoochie Bootchies!!
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