design of a rusted angel. it kind of got knocked slash ignored in the critique. but i want to sub it so here it is

im amazed by the drawing, but there are too much similitude, just concentrate on 1 girl and improve your design around her :)

You drew it once, flipped it, and placed it on the shirt again, why?
It looks too sketchy, sometimes that works, but in this case it is not. Also, it has too much of an anime vibe going on.

I can see that a lot of effort went into this, but it's just nasty. A good thing to keep in mind when designing: would anyone wear this?

If you reworked it-- someone who likes anime might wear it.
it needs a lot more refinement-- are those wings?

looks pretty darn awful... but newer, well thought out work in your style could really be great!

wow, i feel the hatred. well. so much for the opinions i got on other websites. yes indeed though, this need rethought and redesigned as a shirt, actually, it might just not work as a shirt for most people and therefore probably would not sell. i still like it though.

Reminds me of Rinoa from Final Fantasy VIII. Not bad.

I think the girl is very attractive, and it really is almost there. Get rid of the mirror effect and tighten it up some more, and I'd buy it. I hope you resubmit!

i may indeed. danke ^_^

ya can you accent the clevage any more?

maybe u could make one girl a simple line drawing.. that would make it more interesting.. but its a good idea tho..