Alone
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1803 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 19 '07
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30 comments
Average score:
2.03 from 2,333 votes
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oh wow, i love this a lot
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I'd like it if it was a little bit further up on the shirt. I love the idea and the design. 5$
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Good simple drawing without looking sloppy. Also nice use of silhouette. I like =)
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i can't absorb the outcome on me very well. it's so fast "changing" :\ i suppose it's a great design though.
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maybe switch it so the island is on the the front
and bottle on back |
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I agree, switch the images and it's a $5
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thanks for the comments guys. i would be fine if they switched the front and the back around, but what i was trying to get the feel across was that you see the bottle and then you see the guy like left behind.
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i wish the images were a bit bigger as well
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This is actually pretty good. The bottle image should be much larger on the front, centered on the chest. Then you could leave the island where it is at the current size so it gives that feeling of floating away.
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I really like this shirt even how it is but if I could change things...
Simon has the right idea trying to change a depth to the images by angling and size but I think he has his positions wrong. Think about the image as if you could see through the shirt. You'd want to put the island higher and the bottle lower but larger (like a horizon shot) I know this could be hard as the higher the island is on the shirt the more optimistic it looks. Anyway ideas, ideas... $4 I like the idea I just don't think you've perfected it yet. |
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I agree with Remote Man.
Nice design. |
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Cool! A desert island sub ;)
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Yes... I kind of wish all of you talked to me about placement in the critiques now. XP I really like RemoteMan's idea, but this doesn't mean I would have to re-sub right? I mean not just for a placement issue?
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So freaaking hot!
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I try to live alone, but lonely is so lonely alone.....
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i like it... but wish it was higher up on the shirt
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I'm usually not too big on boxes, but it looks sweet here.
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:-) has shaped up very nicely...
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ok design. and i love the concept...now i guess i should wait a while before i submit my sos concept design!
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I think it would be good if they were both on the same side with the island up top and the bottle on the bottom, but it also is good as it is.
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i don't like the placement on the back.. it's too low. if the shirt rides up, the image is lost
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the low placement of the bottle looks phallic
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Papyrus is yucky.
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I love the concept, but I think the bottle should be centered on the chest.
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i like the bottle on the front but i'd like it bigger. and maybe the island a little higher up.
i'd buy it. $5! |
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I like the idea a lot. Maybe raise the positions of the images on the shirt?
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I really like the idea but the shirt has a lot of blank space.
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you dude, great job on the message in the bottle
not so great job on the dude on the island and the details of the "SOS". good effort. |
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you should put the island on the chest area of the shirt and have the bottle on the lower left region of the back.
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