Threadless T-Shirts - Phantom of the Opera

Phantom of the Opera

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fade2red
on Jun 19 '07

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1.70 out of 5

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2,345 people

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327 days ago

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49 comments

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fade2red on Jun 15 '07

oh and thats a real song from it, lyrics and notes lol, i know how threadless ppl like to test ya. lol.

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TheCrowe on Jun 19 '07

:) which song is that in again?

andreaV on Jun 19 '07

i loooooove this! has a great flow! 5 5 5 5 $

mm237 on Jun 19 '07

i like how you did the phantoms mask! $5!

jj5785 on Jun 19 '07

i love the phantom of the opera! 5 !

Ryan_Seacrest on Jun 19 '07

give it up for this staff design. america has spoken: BORING.

IHUGROBOTS on Jun 19 '07

wtfreak.
RYAN SEACREST?

Paula Abdul on Jun 19 '07

^ Fake Ryan..just FYI

britney0ct0pus on Jun 19 '07

haha i'm with ihugrobots, what is the deal with the american idol people?

anyways, i like it, it's creative, i like the play

da Face on Jun 19 '07

I love the Phantom of the Opera as well, but I wonder what song this is, because (I'm pretty positive) it is not from Phantom. I could be wrong though, I just doubt it. $4.

Simon Cowell on Jun 19 '07

Ryan Seacrest knows nothing, he is just a host that is trying to judge like the big boys. The concept isn't too boring, but once again you don't have the skills to properly execute the design. Work on your art skills or your ability to use the applications you are working in.

smoogle on Jun 19 '07

r u effing serious? first Simon. Then Paula. Then Randy. Now Ryan? doesn't anyone have any originality?!?!?!

smoogle on Jun 19 '07

love the tee by the way $5

fade2red on Jun 19 '07

im 90% sure that is from the opera, i was on its website looking up lines and notes. thx for the comments everyone.

riakicksass on Jun 19 '07

i agree, i like how you did the mask. change the style a little.. i think it looks a little funky, on the shirt.

mllesatine on Jun 19 '07

Is that from the film version? Because as far as I can recall, it isn't in the stage version.

I am Amadeus on Jun 20 '07

I like it. However, I think lower portion of the mask looks slightly like the united states.

greenballoon on Jun 20 '07

i love the whole phantom of the opera thing, but it really bugs me how the staff isn't actually a staff. to the point that i would probably buy it if it looked like a staff. but that's probably just me...

fade2red on Jun 20 '07

i have never drawn music so i tried to copy it best lol

Scoobydooto on Jun 20 '07

Looks really great on the black. Maybe if you added some shading it would beef up your design a bit. It's got potential, that's for sure!

Quid Pro Quo on Jun 20 '07

I love how the mask is done but I think the placing is kind of poor. Pretty good though I'll 5 it because i like the idea but if it doesn't win please develope it more and try it again.

reetzy_chick on Jun 20 '07

I love the mask part but the rest needs a little work...make it look more smooth

NessaChan on Jun 20 '07

I like your idea a lot but add me to the list of people who can't figure out what song this is... at first I thought it was from the lesser known musical that is just called "Phantom," but I couldn't find this lyric in that musical either.

BornOfFire on Jun 20 '07

This shirt would get a 5 from me if the lyrics were *actually* from Phantom....I'm 99% certain that they are not!

USDF on Jun 20 '07

Yea, Phantom of the Opera is really in F minor (or Ab Major, depending on how you see it). For future reference, it's in D minor, the key with one flat (that's the little 'b' after the treble clef). I'm sorry we had to have this discussion.

annascene on Jun 20 '07

Yeah...that's not Andrew Lloyd Webber. Great design idea tho. 2 since it's the wrong lyrics.

Sarahnade on Jun 20 '07

do it again with a real Phantom of the Opera song, and I'd buy it in a heart beat

fade2red on Jun 20 '07

damn sorry people., i looked it up on googel it said notes and bars from the phantom of opera. :(

Renazzle on Jun 21 '07

Wow, when did the American Idol judges join threadless??

Madlune on Jun 21 '07

Fix it and it'd be a 5 and buy. Try doing "Masquerade," "Music of the Night," or even "Think of Me"

Snowspirit on Jun 21 '07

This is a fantastic idea, I love POTO!

terryb on Jun 21 '07

im really sorry, but your manuscript is so not real it makes me hate the shirt,,,
the lines are so big... and the clefs are wrongly placed
research ?

fade2red on Jun 21 '07

lol if this doesnt win(which i think it wont) i shall re do the lines and clefs(which i was looking at music and never wrote music before), also add "real" lyrics. lol thx for all the good advice. im glad ppl enjoy the "idea" of it.

littlegreengirl on Jun 21 '07

looks like it says "my heart is buming"

hiimbob on Jun 21 '07

this is sooooooo beatuful...

ninjapiratesrock on Jun 21 '07

1. That's not from Phantom of the Opera.
2. Needs to be redrawn.
But I do like the concept, and I love Phantom of the Opera.
Critiques then resubmit, please?

mdxxxvi on Jun 21 '07

A pretty neat concept...clean it up and you're golden.

gyrfalcon on Jun 22 '07

Please clean this up!

Dabem on Jun 22 '07

Ok, rather than complaining I will actually be helpful.

First on the design aspect add some shading, it would help out the perspective a lot. Music wise each clef (the funky looking things at the beginning) should get 5 lines and the text should be in the middle. You might not want to do that for simplicity's sake, but if you were worried about accuracy I have the phantom of the opera sheet music which you could reference.

Finally, I think the best line would be:
'you will curse the day you did not do, all that the phantom asked of you' or simply 'all that the phantom asked of you' -from "all I ask of you (reprise)"
or
'sing once again with me, our strange duet' -from "the phantom of the opera"

Send it back to critiques, nice try but it's not ready yet.

fade2red on Jun 22 '07

thx dabem, i really appreciate helpful info, like i said i have never written sheet music so i was looking at screen and drawing lol. i will for sure research a lil harder next time around.

Patrizio on Jun 22 '07

The music part of it doesnt make sense... a lot of it anyways... the staff is screwed up and a lot of the notes are in wrong positions and stuff...
It jus doesnt work

dorei on Jun 24 '07

I suggest using lyrics from Music of the Night. Or perhaps just find the musical score and put in the notes, without the words. I think perhaps that may work even better.

jackdante17 on Jun 24 '07

Love Phantom; definitely caught my attention.

I like the concept, but I think the design needs to be refined a little. It seems too... blunt? Using different line widths would make the lineart more interesting, perhaps and I do agree that the staff needs to be corrected. It looks sloppy.

Keep working at it, though. I think you've got something cool, here!

elinpearce on Jun 24 '07

Really cool, I just wish there was a little more of the mask.

hostime on Jun 25 '07

I like the idea, but it was terribly executed.

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dasume on Jun 25 '07

Sorry to add another criticism, but the handwriting looks a little... childish?

Is it possible to change it, and of course change the lyrics as well.

criz on Jun 25 '07

I also like the idea a lot, but I wouldn't wear the phantom of the opera on my t-shirt, or any musical for that matter.

Saladid on Jun 25 '07

dont like words or maybe if it where more just typed text maybe that would look better anyways i like alot just think some touch ups! and it would be a 5

fade2red on Jun 26 '07

its got like a lil time left to vote on. im happy with the helpful ideas and not so helpful ones. i got work to be done on my art, start adding more shading, more detail, i can i just get lazy and that shows in art. thx everyone :)

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