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This version is more understandable than your first. :]
it's just that the "if" correction would have been better. :] I'd give 4$ for this anyway. :] |
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But... the art's the same. Are people really taking off points for grammar? You guys know that stuff can get fixed by Threadless if they decide to print, right?
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yes, yes...much better wording this time around. i still don't particularly like the design, personally. but it's better this time around.
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About my design
[PEACE]