The ChaOs
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Jun 12 '07
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I like the blue at the bottom.
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heh. cute. i love the sun's facial expressions.
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the third panel is a little too blank. maybe you could keep the background stars? if you truly meant the end of the universe, then it's too depressing. But if you only meant the end of the earth, I think a star or two could stay.
anyway, I love the sneezing earth. it's great. |
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that's not how i would spell a sneeze personally.
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i would like just the sun on a shirt. it's amazing
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Cute sun!
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I second the idea of having the sun on another shirt.
I don't like the fact that the last panel is blank... As DrVSP said, some stars would be nice; after all, the universe doesn't really cease to exist if our sun is gone. |
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am I the only one who finds this to be a little mysogynistic?
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whoops wrong shirt
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why is the sun gone, too?
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ahh chumm?? i always thought it was aachooo
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i think it could depend... i like it...lol
... see mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/4166/Life_is_unFair |
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But why is the 3rd case empty ?
... see mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/4166/Life_is_unFair |
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The third case is empty because the sun went out after the Earth sneezed on it..
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LOL! The sun's face in the second panel! Nice!
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i think you should keep a few stars in there. and i would change the word choumm to just chou cos that how people sort of sound. thats just me being fussy XD bnut still a $5
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Love the first 2 panels (#2 is priceless) - the 3rd one needs something, I'm not sure what.
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3rd panel idd needs something... the stars i would say
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Haha really funny actually. Id say the design is more striking with nothing in the final panel. Not something I would wear but really well done on the funny concepts and good execution
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I love the sun. I agree, he deserves his own shirt.
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I think the "sound effect" should be "AH-CHOO!" rather than "AT-CHOUM," and there should definitely be something in the third panel.
I have no idea, maybe the Earth with a flashlight or just the stars? |
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 15 '07 It's like a Sopranos version of the world ending.
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This reminds me a little too much of "Eclipse," but I like it nevertheless.
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staffell on Jun 15 '07 highly scientifically inaccurate
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My thought as well, staffell. But it's a cartoon, so there ya go.
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I agree that I wouldn't spell a sneeze like that. cute illustration tho.
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yea, definitely respell the sneeze. funny
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it s been while since a threadless shirt made me laugh, doesn t look super cool, but it s really funny
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It's not meant to be scientifically accurate... it's an idea of a comic-book end to the world. Plus, although sneezes aren't normally spelled that way, that is more phonetically accurate... it matches my sneezes better, anyway. Maybe I just sneeze weirdly?
Anyway, regardless of spelling, it's clear what's happening, so why does it really matter? And the third panel should have some stars. :) |
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I guess you woulda figured on geting hammered on any lettering one way or the other eh DAV? I dig it. I would like to see some stars in the last panel too though. 5 for now.
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Comic strips don't work well on shirts.
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Great fun, I'd buy it. Could do with a more standard 'sneeze spelling' and a few stars in the last panel, but it works anyway.
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very cool. But put some stars in.
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If there isn't sun, there will be not stars....
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61 days later
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Stars are suns that are not as close as 'our' sun... I like the design, but I agree that it'd be even nicer with a few scattered stars in the last square!
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