Early worm.....
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Jun 12 '07
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ha! that's funny..
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*CHOMP*
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mj00 on Jun 12 '07 This shirt proves what I have always known: waking up early might seem like a good idea, but it will eventually bite you in the ass.
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TERRIBLE. $0
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hah! i love mjoo's response. i love the concept behind this one =]
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artdrops on Jun 12 '07 a little higher over the seams and a tad bit smaller, plus add some textures or more shading on the bird, other than that it is very funny, I like it! great first sub $3
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$5
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Thanks guys. This is way exciting! Funny comment mjoo, that's pretty much what inspired this design. That and I've always felt sorry for worms :)
@dustball. Little help here brother, what's wrong with it. I need to know these things for next time. |
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Don't worry, dustball doesn't like anything.
I think this would be a winner if it had more textures and shading. Please keep the basic elements though! (especially the worm's chompers and expression) |
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I like mjoo's take too.
And it should totally be the wraparound placement. |
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i agree the wrap around adds effect. like oo i may be getting this freaking worm, but then the person turns around and, oh snap i'm getting my ass bit. cute!
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wrap around 5
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This shirt proves what I have always known: waking up early might seem like a good idea, but it will eventually bite you in the ass.
haha - love it. love the shirt too! $5 (forget dustball. he's just a troll.) |
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gives the phrase 'that'll bite you in the butt' new meaning. Awesome
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this is hilarious. i love it. i love when people change up or give new meanings to old sayings. yeahyeah love it! and i agree with ohsorachie. haha
awesome!! |
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I'd totally buy this
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I laughed out very loud :)) And at the same time I want to sream "oh no!" to warn the poor worm! The worm's facial expression is hilarious!
I like the idea of playing on the phrase. Especially this one because I think it depends on the perspective - is it the early bird eating the worm, or the early worm being eaten by the bird?! For all early worms I want this PRINTed!! $5!! |
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Oh, I forgot:
placement like on the orange shirt, colour green, please! |
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Bwahaha!
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Thanks for the comments guys! You all rock!
@tmonkey. That's my feeling too. Stupid birds, why are they up so early and making all that racket huh? Worms on the other hand are nice and quiet. |
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lol! Maybe a different placement of the evil worm; I'm not sure I like the but biting. If you moved him back he could be about to bite the bird's tail.
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i agree. and i also like the bottom placement, but the colors don't really matter.
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i love shirt ideas like this one, where the animal being hunted is really hunting its mortal enemy, classic and witty its a 5 for me! :)
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Go go, tobasco !
I would love to see a redesign with mj00's text my criticism : the bird is a bit plain. make it more realistic or give it some of that fantastic snap you've given the worm ( facial expression and human body traits ) my praise : instantly able to get the concept and the worm is great |
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Ha! Cheers Helo, haven't seen you online in awhile.
Thanks for your comments. I agree about the bird, the worm turned out REALLY well and I think perhaps I could have worked a little longer on the bird, but the message is clear which is the main thing really. |
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love it! as a dedicated sleepinner, id totally wear this!
agree with helo and mjoo. |
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i like the positioning of the blue and periwinkle shirts...Funny! Nice job...$5
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side positioning is great!
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lovely work there tobias, nice to see all those years of drawing with katarina paid off. she'd be proud. I'd buy it but only in blue.... the other colours clash with my complexion:)
xx midget |
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Cheers Claire! Yeah it's such an accurately drawn bird isn't it? :b
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awesome! i love the placement on both the blues. think i like it best in green as its my fav colour and could be the grass $5
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Very nice, but a better execution would be nice! 4
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haha
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wraparound placement!
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it's kind of creepy where the biting worm is aiming... maybe make it so it doesn't look like it's going to bite the bird's ass.
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poor little birdie...it never had a chance...:[. i like it!
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$5
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I dig the side/wraparound placement of the blue one... adds to the comedic-ness-whatever.
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maybe if he was rearing up to bite his leg instead of his butt?
but it is a nifty idea :) |
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Yeah but then it wouldn't be the whole "bites you in the arse" thing. Leg is good, butt is better!
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bottom placements are better. :] nice work!
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this is awesome for a first sub
i definately agree with changing the placement to a wraparoound, though, and maybe a bit more detaling on the bird good job |
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I like this. Would like it even more as a realistic worm and bird, with semi-realistic giant sharp teeth on the worm. Cartoony is fun, but sometimes realistic with the unexpected can be even better. I enjoy seeing the worm get one in on the bird...considering that birds like robins are so darn nasty about their worm hunting. I've seen them torture a worm endlessly before abandoning it! Time for a little revenge.
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i like the humor behind this. classy.
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I still think this round goes to the bird.
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@ mephitine Yeah, I did start out with a realistic drawing, but I had issues making the worm realistic, I mean it's a worm, a long pink thing with no expression. So that's why I went more cartoony! But thanks for your input.
@infamousempire NO WAY! The worm is getting some much deserved pay back here! |
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i like the green one, good submit! 5!
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Jemae on Jun 18 '07 cute! :D
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Jemae on Jun 18 '07 i like the wraparound placement too!
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the color and placement of the top left dark blue one is best :)
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this is fantastic! i love it! its cute as well as witty
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I really like the concept and the design. At first I thought that a more "cartoony" bird would match better with the style of the worm, but as I thought about it more it works great as-is with the wrap-around design. From the front it looks like the usual bird-eating-worm scene, but on the back you get the comedic twist. Love it!
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im taking it the worm is pissed...
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Well his son and wife got eaten the other day because they were late to school and work. So this is Mr Worm getting some well deserved payback.
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I like the wrap around too! I hate worms, but I love the shirt!
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Love mjoo's comment. Like the shirt exactly how it is. :)
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*agrees with "artdrops"
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BITE HIM IN THE ASS!!!!
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i like it
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HAHAHA
love. |
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Thanks for the votes and comments guys!!!!!
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22 days later
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love it man!
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16 days later
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it would be funny if that bird happened to need to poop at this time of the morning...
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12 days later
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lol. that is funny!
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246 days later
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i like it ;]
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