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Ditto. And maybe a monster with teeth. Something with a lil more edge to it. Reminds me too much of Cousin It. Otherwise, bad ass idea.
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Maybe the mouse is a bit too hump backed.
Love the idea though but on a different colour tee please. |
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it bothers me that the mouses face is a d ifferent color from its body
other than that i really like it |
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But he's not actually doing anything! I'd switch the rat to a bug, give the hero a can of bug spray (highlights as a raygun) and then it would work for me. But the concept itself is tight.
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Love this design - 4. Change the color to something that makes the heroic outlines more noticable and the shirt from so ... pukey.
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Wonderful idea, love the outlines. The colors kind of remind me of Sprite. Love the idea, but i would change the rat.
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don't think folks will agree, but would have loved to see this w/ the chick as the hero and the guy up on the chair
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I like that, chelly- along similar lines, maybe a kid and his/her mom (doesn't matter which of the two is the hero, works both ways)?
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Oh man, this is great - everyday heroe!! Perfect, from the concept to the execution! I just LOVE the "heroes" expression and the mouse's monster shadow :))
PRINT PRINT PRINT!!! S$ |
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Tom Burns. Everytime I see a bloke with an Abe Lincoln beard. Some even say Abe copied Tom's look.
Cool design! |
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"I'd switch the rat to a bug, give the hero a can of bug spray (highlights as a raygun) and then it would work...
Perfect. I agree with that 100%. Awesome work! I think this is going to get printed! |
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pls. lets stop suggesting to replace this to that. the artist may want it that way and it has a purpose...maybe.
for me it's perfectly fine the way it is. lovely. $5 |
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mjoo: are you saying superheros never do a pose before acting?!
anyway it's a daydream... I wouldn't daydream of killing a mouse, not rather than of being a hero in general. |
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sickly, I'm saying it's the action that makes them a superhero, not the posing. Why not show that? (Also, in the comics I read heroes pose after they defeat villains, not before.)
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Make the monster's arms a little bigger, not longer though. And maybe give him some large teeth or something. Different color too. Good concept.
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I like your drawing style. Haha, gosh, I keep going back to look at the picture. Very clever.
I love it... wouldn't buy it, but I'd love to see other people wearing it. Um, what? Anyways. 5! |
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p.s. i don't think it's "a lot" sexist, but rather just a fun poke at stereotypes, archetypes and storytelling in general. those aren't the best words but I think you know what I mean.
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Excellent! XD
It's not sexist, since I know a lot of girls who are scared of my pet rats. Which reminds me, the rat needs to look more ratty - I've never seen one with a bald head and fur elsewhere. |
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