Needs Salt
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1812 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 10 '07
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1.66 from 2,390 votes
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will give it to my girl friend... good!!
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Its kinda gross, but oddly cool at the same time.
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Cool
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halarious
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ahahaha schweet but its kinda hard to read the words
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You really need to clean up the white spaces, like for instance between her legs in 2nd and 3rd ones.
Also, make it another font, that is easier to read. |
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oh, i love it. 5$
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Close-up please?
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 10 '07 Half the joke will be going into the armpits the way it is presented right now....but isn't this a little stereotypical of a woman's wants and needs? Even if it's right some of the times? lol.
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I agree with the comments above, clean up those white spaces, make sure the armpit thing doesn't happen, looks good!
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heavy!
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i really like the idea but i agree with everyone else on cleaning it up first. :p
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Those other people made good suggestions about cleaning it up & making it legible. Other than those little things, it's awesome!
What a cruel little girl. Your sense of humor is so twisted. (In a good way) :) |
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Dig it, but you may want to put her comment in a bubble above her and to the left.
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I don't think you need the first two images, or for that matter any image but the last with the words. People will pretty much get the idea that the blue thing is giving its heart to the pink thing in just one image.
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Or you could arrange it differently... not digging the straight across comic strip style.
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its kind of gross but i find it amusing and love it. nice work 5
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I am with skafiendoo7, you only need the last image, I think without the text. As cute as the preceding ones are, it would be stronger with just the one image.
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mj00 on Jun 11 '07 I agree with others that the whole idea of this is communicated in the last pair of people. I'd suggest working with that concept, and exaggerating it further. The pair could be at a restaurant, and she could be actually adding salt to the heart (with veins still connected to his body) and then you don't even need the text. Try some changes and send this through Critique.
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amusing. I agree that just the last panel would suffice. or up and down arrangement... then you get my $5
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i can't see what's going on in this...
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(too small...)
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what you loving... what you eating... hahahah
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OWEE! OW! OW!
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You took the time to design the shirt and this is how you present it?
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a little bit to hard to see.
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i agree with the others who have said that you only need the last pair for people to get the idea
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just needs a little clean up work.
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haha
mmmm heart |
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awwww.. lol.. a sweet heart and a sour attitude.. love the combination!.. i really like it XD.. i dont like how the wording ends on the sleeve though, other than that, its very nice!
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10 days later
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they're wrong about only needing the last picture, with that you would think she just grabbed it out herself when obviously he decided to offer it to her. you must have been inspired ;)
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