There are some things that are funny (in a bad way) about the text. "Kochen" should be black like the rest of the text. Aline "Hansel und Gretel" instead of having each word jump around all over the place, and "mit" should be in a similar font to the others, not the straight-looking one - it's out of place.
Besides from that it's neat ;) I like the pseudo-german.
Woah this is gorgeous. It's like a 60s children's book I have! I agree about the Kochen being black. As for aligning the words, I say don't. It looks nice and hand-drawn, a bit imperfect, which is what I like about it.
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renfrue
for J-Ray's Battle contest
Theme: dark side of the fairytale
Syrasha
HA! Great stuff. They look so happy! "This is where it's very important to sample the taste before seasoning..."
harpo25
awesome!
DrVSP
yeah, witches are rather salty, so you don't want to add too much extra!
this is fabulous! and hurray for text that really goes with the design and adds to it!
martiandrivein
hahaha
renfrue
it's like a young Rolf, don't cha think?
Andorra
hehe it's in german!
great! :)
t4sh4
Cute!
Grillsovs
There are some things that are funny (in a bad way) about the text. "Kochen" should be black like the rest of the text. Aline "Hansel und Gretel" instead of having each word jump around all over the place, and "mit" should be in a similar font to the others, not the straight-looking one - it's out of place.
Besides from that it's neat ;) I like the pseudo-german.
icebar
funny funny title
renfrue
Grill, I tried out the Kochen in black and i just liked this better.
I appreciate your input :-)
yea, I could aline it if need be
iamtenninjas
hahahahahahahha!
this is so so so funny.
and i love it so.
oleanderblankets
cute I like it in blue!
skullcat
yay! great colours, love it on the blue.
bhoomika
Ha I like it!
I would wear this on the blue.. red seems a bit too bright.
$5
timadd
I would buy this just for the German.
And is it really hänsel?
tyrsalvia
lol
MPS
Love it. Please print.
Vicsancas
A.W.S.O.M.E
Not link red background, but the bluegreenish is perfect :D
5$
Vicsancas
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Dislexia rules! xD
loveisasongx
omg i love this. I'd buy it.
missmargot
Woah this is gorgeous. It's like a 60s children's book I have! I agree about the Kochen being black. As for aligning the words, I say don't. It looks nice and hand-drawn, a bit imperfect, which is what I like about it.
puff_de_cutie
I love how you did this. Perfect.
puff_de_cutie
Oh and don't change the color, it's great! It makes it look more like those really old school children's books.
an_gelc
this is really really awesomely perfect.. but i want to make the size bigger.. to flaunt its awesomeness. ;P
blossompossum
Holy crap, sub of awesomeness! I like the style, comparing the childish look to the "dark side of the fairytale". $5 :D
herky
reminds me of those "old style" children's books, looks great on red.
da Face
Absofrickinlutely brilliant. I would definetly wear it on blue. $5 fo' sho' .
hubavai
illmatic.
corey9
very nice! 5
very 60's. very cool.
Thorthdls
Das ist wunderbar!!! I definitely liebe with the Blau background.
$$$$$. Serves the old witch right.
renfrue
thanks y'all
:-)
J-Ray
I love this... it looks like it's straight out of a 1960's German fairy tale book. Great job and I'd buy it!!! $5
nosutt
great concept, i just think it could be illustrated better
ISABOA
WAY TO GO RENFRUE - 5
The Wee Straggler
I like it. I think I'd like it better with some outlining on H&G...but this is possibly just me.
schmeeee
Witch sausages. . .mmm gut!! I sooo love this one, print it, I want it!
theurbanraptor
niiiiiiice.
Evolv3
Am I the only one who can see that the witch's arms sticks out from behind the pot, not fron inside it?
jean_warhol
No I see that.... but its still a cool drawing
renfrue
^yea, ez fix
thx Jean
cfabela911
the witch's hand bugs me
BrandonB11
very cute and good intepretation of the theme
LTimmons1
take the hand out of the pot and i would be a much happier person
zmobie
it does remind me of the illustration in old german fairy tale books, so good work on getting that look down to some degree.
tracerbullet
the german is what makes this hilarious :-)
backtozero
Sehr Gut! Deutsch!!!
J-Ray
The steam looks great too :)
sparky2072
CooL & Cute. I want a German tee!
J-Ray
not a bad score!!! Congrats :)
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