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 Some people start fires, some people fight fires, and there are those who ignore fires and stare at Blaze do her thing on the Pleasure Pole.
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I like the idea, but there's too much to look at. I think you should simplify it a little.
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maybe remove the firefighter on the pole. after all the focus is Blaze on the pleasure pole hahaha
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i like the idea i think is very creative!
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yeah, like others said, try and simplify it and it'll be bloody brilliant.
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Awesome concept.
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artdrops on Jun 07 '07 I think it takes only a milisecond to figure out what's going on, keep as is, I like it.
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Could be simpler, amazing as is....$5
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im in ........................$5.............
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if you're going to simplify it you could get rid of the box on the bottom, its not really needed to understand what's going on, and like hksofa said to get rid of the lone firefighter on the pole
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i think it would've been funnier if it was a fireman poledancing, with all of his buddies wonderin what the hell he was doin
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HAHA I agree with the junkwa
But maybe the guy on the pole should be smaller and the girl bigger And the box is fine :] |
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haha wow ^ that was hilarious junk-wa
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Yeah, Junk-wa's might be a better concept. But this is a pretty good one as well, I like the main fireman's grumpy face and the fact that the others are ignoring an emergency to stare at the pretty lady.
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kaloyster on Jun 08 '07 Too busy.
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I like Junk-wa's more, but if you're going to keep the firefighter in the foreground on the pole, at least get rid of the box.
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Ellsswhere on Jun 08 '07 i agree, remove the guy so you easily get the point across with the girl and firefighters. you did a great tweak to your ninja family design and it payed off, do the same here. still a 5 for the design though
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remove the guy in front and $5's baby!
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keep it as it is...
if you take out the guy, it's just some dumb blonde on a pole... as is, it's an emergency and all the guys aren't paying attention except the one guy in front. i would NOT buy it WITHOUT him. |
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Junk-Wa: That is a wickedly funny idea! Thanx for the comments guys.
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Perfect as it is mate - i wouldn't wear a shirt with a poledancing fireman
And calling her blaze? Thats genius. 5$ |
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No need for the box, the pole automatically becomes a pleasure pole with her on it :)
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I maybe think you should simplify it. You should definetely lose the box, though. And maybe switch the position of the stripper/crowd and the firefighter?
Also, I'd maybe cut the alarm-lights and use the color for her skin instead. She blends too much with the background as it is. Giving her a skincolor would really make her pop, and you wouln't have to switch their positions. |
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move the other guy on the other pole to the back?
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haha funny. i like it the way it is, busy and all
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i think people will want to look at it and be like what let me see i want to see what it is, therefore i like that it takes a few seconds to get it, its also funnier that way :) 4
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ok then.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 10 '07 I think the idea would come out better if you swapped the firefighter and the pole dancer's positions, so she would be the first thing you would see in the front with all the fighters gathered arond with big smile on their faces, and the fire fighter's grumpy expression in the background would still be part of the joke. but yeah, there's no need for the pole dancers box. We get the joke. Really funny idea and well-drawn besdies that. 3.
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very funny, but in complete agreement that you should ditch the box
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Yeah I like it, I think you should remove the box.
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Thanx for all suggestions...the funny thing is the box was a last minute iten that I just put in. I thought that the message would have gotten lost: like why is there a pole dancer dancing in a fire hall? Well it's all in the pole and that so happens to be a dancing pole not a fire fighters pole, hence the box. but I guess it was overkill.
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make the stripper more visible and bold, and lose the box
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the guy in front, although very well done, if sort of unessasary...it's a bit much. overall it's a great illustration. I think just the firefighter watching blaze is good enough.
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awe... so nice.. wayy cute
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Haha...pleasure pole. That's great.
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Maybe if the fireman was the exotic dancer. That would be funny.
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I say get rid of the fireman doing his job and just have the girl and the watchers. $4 at the mo.
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probably don't need the box either but that's up to you.
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Agree with hksofa3
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nice idea, i don't like the faces and it's all a bit too much.
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The illustration is good, but I don't think this is a very good idea for a t-shirt.
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