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whoa! cool concept...but the swirls are slightly distracting for some reason.
i'd simplify a bit, maybe not do the faux-aged thing... but the joke is simply hilarious. |
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I would say don't make it look aged, and make the narwhale more clearly a narwhal - but it is definitely a kick-ass concept
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i'll give you a 5 but i agree with the above comments. less pseudo vintage and make it more narwhaly.
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Aw, I love the style of this. Could the narwhal horn be bigger or more clearly a part of the narwhal (texture?)... Not that it matters, I guess, I'd wear it without any changes.
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But the vintage-ness totally adds. Narwhals are associated with history more than the present so I think it works. This way, it looks like a legend about a guy who had a narwhal for a cue stick!
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LOVE the aged texture/look. Do not do away with that. Do make the narwhal more obviously a narwhal and more obviously part of the cue. Then print it so I can buy it :-)
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this made me grin. i think it'd be groovy if the narwhal were flopped on the floor with a disgruntled look on its face, instead of defying gravity!
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