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i dig.
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the word play was not needed, and the whole dyslexic thing just makes me dislike it.
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nice idea, just a little disjointed. maybe lose the circle. i'm not reading to much into the meaning. keep playing with the type though, you are onto something nice that just isn't working yet.
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Cool concept, but I'd lose the text and maybe make the image a bit bigger. The image by itself would be sweeeeet.
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Wow I like it a lot, i think the words are the best bit actually, that's what grabbed my attention, my girlfriend and i stared it for ages saying estpedrian over and over lol
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