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Pretty cool design. :)
It bugs me that you can't see a little bit of the first p, shouldn't it be visible? |
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Wait, what? This looks exactly like a cake. How could this possibly be more of a cake than it is now? (I'm genuinely curious, travioli)
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Yes, it is recognizable as a cake, it just looks too solid and perfectly cylindrical. Maybe give it some fluffy icing texture or something.
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really, why the cake cries? Is it the birthday of the cake? will he die the very same day and that is the reason for tears??? ;P
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I love the idea.
Show a little of the 1st p, and maybe switch the colors up some. Maybe make the eyes a little darker than the icing on top, and make the fire a little brighter than the cake... |
Happy birthday to me.
Happy birthday to me.
Happy birthday dear cakey.
Happy birthday to me."