Always One Stuck At The Bottom
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1817 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 05 '07
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1.83 from 2,510 votes
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I like the idea. The changing expressions are great.
The building he's grabbing isn't consistant through the three scenes, though. Windows changing, broken end disappearing, etc. Also, the motion lines in the last panel probably aren't needed and actually look like part of a tower off the top of the builing. Overall, a neat concept that just needs a little tuning. |
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What if you did the same concept but drew it in the style of an airline pamphlet?
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This is great!
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any of those three by themself could be good
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Make the above changes, or maybe just go with one or another.
This is cool. |
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The tail looks really weird to me, and it kind of looks like he's hitting himself in the face with the building.
I'll agree with I play despite the rain, changing the expression on his face would help. I like the concept. |
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It reminds me of that Chewits advert from aages ago with Godzilla eating famous buidlings.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-XDy31iUWPg I'm not saying it's a rip off, it just made we think of this. |
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The Chewits ads were at the back of my mind when I was first drawing this. The monsters name was "The Muncher".
Apparently this summer they will be relaunching the ads with a new, CGI monster named Chewie. http://www.chewits.co.uk/Layouts/ |
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i like the middle panel best. can stand on its own.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jun 07 '07 I actually think the final panel can stand on its own....plus the whole joke is really told on that final one.
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like the idea but i dont really like the style
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REPTAR!!!
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hahaha! i love it.
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it's great, but needs fine tuning in the continuity department.
ex. in the 1st panel, there is something white between between his legs,then not in any others, and the things I PLAY DESPITE THE RAIN mentioned also, i think it would look nicer without the outline for the panels great work though |
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Thanks for all the comments.
This was my first submission and I guess I kinda rushed it:) |
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I really like it as it is (never mind about the in-between-his-legs-detail, that can be fixed in a minute), above all I love his facial expressions!! $5
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