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Nice illustration, but I don't quite like the idea behind it. Cool art, though. Good luck in future designs.
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don't like the alternate and i agree with eunice - the word is really tough to read. you probably don't even need it. but yes i love the pi symbol for the pitchfork and the math scrawling behind him.
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Aw, I really like this! If anything, it's too refined- I like the idea of an angry kid scrawling this in the margin of his algebra textbook.
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Heh... the original:)
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hmm... a lot of my writing there disappeared... anyhow, not nearly as pleasant on the eyes or as clever, but from it the idea was born. I was pretty annoyed with math at that time as I recall...
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This is pretty cool! i like the fire version.
This is what my own personal hell will look like If I don't shape up! 4+$ |
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oh ya, love the equations in the background. i would get it just because it has logs back there.. god i hate logs..
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Brilliant sir! Absolutely brilliant.
I love the design. There are many of us who can share in the math hatred department, so it's a good concept and it was pulled off nicely. Well done. I'd wear it. |
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Edited: Hope the formulas are to your liking Mr. fuzzball136. Your powers of observation are astounding.
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Re-Edit: Some annoying little artifacts popped up when I changed the size of the background layer. Fixed.
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@Starstruk: How 'bout something like this? I had this in the critiques but the plain background was the clear winner, followed by the other flames. Keep in mind it would have the shading lines and whatnot, not just plain, but I just don't have time to make a new gif right this moment :)
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@annettettenna: That's a quick fix. I'll post another edit with capitals on the lower line later tonight.
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@12monkeys: this was already mentioned and has been fixed : P Another quick, but minor fix with the sine rule is on its way as soon as I get a chance to get on the computer with the original too!
Thanks for taking the time to check it out and comment! |
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Tweakage! The sine rule has been fixed, or rather clarified. Anything other small changes that need to be addressed? I wish I got this much feedback while I was still doing my critique ^^
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I love the, and hate math, and wish I were more inclined towards the design, which is not a helpful comment at all.
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love this, so does my mathematician bf, I saw the word right away without seeing the title, I don't think it's a problem, I'd buy
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^kinda agree with the person above me. I can remember joking around with classmates about how terrible math was, but then again, that was third grade.
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Holy she-smokes, you made a lot mistakes on the formulas buddy, hope you didn't fail your final. hehe just kidding, hopefully.
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Hey Puff! For the record I only made one and a half mistakes on the formulas. Also, I got a 90% in calculus so apparently it didn't turn out to be much of a problem :P
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Haha, that came out kinda bad. I know who puff is and by hey, I actually meant hello.
Oh, and also, if you haven't seen it, those problems have been fixed. |
About my design
Anyhow, hope you like it. This is technically my second sub, but it's the first one I've put any real effort into making it look good. You can see a larger version of the alternate design here.
Thanks for looking!