Forever and Ever!!!!!!!

its really niceley done, but i cant stand it for some reason. maybe it sust the fact that i dont like guitars?

For me, the appeal of this is the doodle-style. It seems like something you sketched in the margins of a notebook during class, and there's a lot of charm in that. What kills this for me is the shading of "forever," which takes it out of that doodle place.

If you resubmit, try using colored lines on a white tee.

agree. the forever distracts from the rest of the design. its hard to read.

yes. i rele dont like the text. too distracting. nice design otherwise.

i like the faces on the flames coming off the cord.

i like the faces on the flames coming off the cord.

I don't really mind the text, but I'd take out the shading in "FOREVER". The faces on the flame are a nice touch!

I think it could use some color.

I thought it said "FOREIGN!!!"

shouldn't you put it on a black tee and add a bit more color

Not my style, but the strings don't make any sense.