Yeah unfortunaly the whole design loses heaps through the poor text treatment. I like the concept but really wish the text had been treated better, there's just something off with the perspective.
I think perhaps some colour wouldn't have gone amiss either. Sorry this is just my opinion!
$5, i don't care how crappy the text is, or if its on white... any shirt with 'zeitgeist' on it, i will buy. And i know about 100 people that will also buy it.
I had a prof in college that would orgasm over that word, and we all felt that pain. I need this.
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