yay 1st sub =) just tried to make something funky and original.

Twister or Mindtrap? One or the other. Either way, it's bright and colorful, but the design is too large on the shirt for my tastes. I don't think I would wear it.

good concept... I think.

i like the colors and the design but i'm not sure about the detail on the sleeve.

Not keen on the sleeve detail either. Design is quite cool though.

Funky? Yes.
Original? Not really.
There's not really much to this design, and the colours are kind of burning my eyes.
Also, ditch the sleeve detail. How can I say this nicely? I can't. The sleeve detail is just flat out ugly.

I agree with dandy^ on the sleeve thing.

the sleeve is strange, the colors are cool, but it looks strange on both shirt colors

its really making me dizzy sorry man not feeling it

yah its supposed to be twister in a twisty designy thingo... was also quite iffy about the spinner thingo on the sleeve oh well thanks for comments pplz. gonna experiment with a whole lot of different styles until i can get something to work cheers.