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May 28 '07
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Spoofee

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by Spoofee
Vladdypwnz
Vladdypwnz on May 28 '07
It's a bit monotonous in black and white on colored backgrounds.
Bowtie
Bowtie on May 28 '07
put some colour in it, Graphic is great, but it needs the colour to make it stand out.
Bowtie
Bowtie on May 28 '07
I really, REALLY like this, so please work on it and re-sub :)
inskydiamonds
inskydiamonds on May 28 '07
I really like this shirt a lot and would buy it.
erin_everlasting
erin_everlasting on May 29 '07
great, but needs more colour :)
dreamstorm
dreamstorm on May 29 '07
Yes, please put color and resubmit, because the design is awesome :)
Degazio
Degazio on May 29 '07
There's a party on my shirt!
fouchnickens
fouchnickens on May 29 '07
I normally would add my voice to the "add color" camp, but looking at your illustration I actually like the black and white because it allows the details to stand on their own.
chronically bizarre
chronically bizarre on May 29 '07
this definitely needs more color and I feel like the balloons should be going in a specified direction.
closetome543
closetome543 on May 30 '07
more colorful would be fun, but i think it looks rad b&w already.

4.

beautiful by the way!
Dreaded
Dreaded on May 30 '07
;o; Love you!
alphabetapi
alphabetapi on May 30 '07
just black ink on a light colored shirt. no white fills. i think it would look alot better.
lenoircouture
lenoircouture on May 31 '07
omg omg omg seriously want thisssss$5555555555555
uchicagobookworm
uchicagobookworm on May 31 '07
don't add color, put on white shirt instead
Renazzle
Renazzle on May 31 '07
I think the design would look much better on a gray or white shirt. The brightly colored shirts take away from the design.



Or just keep the black and put it on a colored shirt, but no white filling, it would work with green or red I think.
theadi
theadi on Jun 01 '07
I agree with Renazzle re: grey shirt or taking away the white filling. I was about to suggest that myself.

It's not bad on the softer blue background but the pink and blue t-shirt colours are really too harsh.

Or make the lines white (no filling) and put it on a dark blue shirt.

Also maybe rearrange them just a touch or add one or two more balloons to make the formation a bit less square. The left side of the design is almost a straight edge - you could take that small balloon at the top and move it down and to the left a bit to break it up.



I really like this, it just needs a couple of changes!
predictableSNAFU
predictableSNAFU on Jun 01 '07
it would be cool if it wasn't a square. . . like maybe have some balloons lower of higher.



very neat design
aleyc19
aleyc19 on Jun 01 '07
i like it on white

id buy it $5
Fennecky
Fennecky on Jun 02 '07
Oh, I like this a lot - don't add color! Love it on that cream color. :)
lollyintheskywithdiamonds
I love this! Please don't add colour!!



It reminds me a bit of Finding Nemo when they're dodging the jellyfish.
Buchanan
Buchanan on Jun 03 '07
I love this, it makes me feel my favorite way. Up up and away.
ningsta
ningsta on Jun 03 '07
I agree that adding some muted colors would be awsome,

but more importantly the balloons need more direction/movement

cool illustration though
Tsunami Sunset
Tsunami Sunset on Jun 03 '07
b+w
autumn_firefly
autumn_firefly on Jun 03 '07
Hell Yes
Kate.G
Kate.G on Jun 03 '07
have like one balloon one colour
EtherPants
EtherPants on Jun 04 '07
Try it either on more neutral backgrounds or have the designs coming around the side
aileen9489
aileen9489 on Jun 04 '07
please have colors!
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worldchampionofnothing
worldchampionofnothing on Feb 11 '12
s.u.p.e.r.b
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