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my first submission - feedback would be much appreciated :)
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The way you've shown the butterfly wings is the best part of the shirt, very textural. Consider doing something similar with the deer to give a fur texture.
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I like the simple deer vs the ornate butterfly...I would totally wear this and know lots of folks who would also.
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Aaaah! So cute! Would love to see it on Kelly Green though. I think it'd be good with a black outline too.
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thanks for all the comments guys, it was my first attempt and i didn't realise there was a critique section - sorry! :)
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er.....just before anyone thinks i am being vain....er....that was not my comment above (?!)
thank you though, whoever you are!!! LoL |
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i think the wings are a tad thick. just trim off a TINY bit. other than that, i'd love this.. in another color. definitely not pink though, the white doesn't show up much on pink
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Weiiiiiiird.... That butterfly looks EXACTLY like a dragonfly I drew in 9th grade, with the vines making up parts of the wings. Anyway, it's not my kind of thing.
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