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the text reads "though evil is sweet in his mouth and he hides it under his tongue, he can not bear to let it go..."
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i think the lollipop looks like it doesn't belong with the rest of the design. it doesn't flow with the style.
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I agree with 35mmurray. Something needs to be done with the lollipop to make it so it fits more in with the rest of the design, which is just great.
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This is definitely my kind of design. I actually love the pink that's so in contrast to everything else. :)
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i agree the pink takes away from it and i don't reallylike the bird thing much - though i like the text - very thought provoking :)
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i think the brighter pink would work as opposed to the baby pink or a bright lime green, yeah and lose the text.
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wow. you did Flowers In The Attic? That's amazing! but this design doesnt show off your talent at all..
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what about keeping the pink and reworking the swirl in the lolli?
kinda looks more like a bubble gum splat from a distance |