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If the Moon Was Made of Cheese, a Mouse Would be i

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If the Moon Was Made of Cheese, a Mouse Would be its King.
Ikarusmyancestor
Ikarusmyancestor on May 24 '07
cute
S_wave81
S_wave81 on May 24 '07
idea - yes. design - no.
zac_layman
zac_layman on May 24 '07
$10. but really only $5
JGilla
JGilla on May 24 '07
the idea is cheesy ;)
doctordeirdre
doctordeirdre on May 24 '07
i like mice. $5
Cantatus
Cantatus on May 25 '07
Great idea, but the one thing I don't like about it is how boxed off it looks on the shirt. Maybe space some stars around the shirt more?
93360
93360 on May 25 '07
yes good idea, design needs more imagination
morgyn
morgyn on May 25 '07
Nice idea, but it looks more like the earth than the moon... unless it's supposed to?
daja
daja on May 25 '07
liked the idea...design is wired though.

spudchick
spudchick on May 25 '07
I agree w/ cantatus, the stars should just diminish going out rather than staying boxed, and perhaps the actual cheese/mouse part should be a little smaller. The moon could be crater-y to suggest swiss. I like it, but then I like mice, the moon, cheese, moon/cheese references, wine, starry skies and small animals promoted to royal office. So with a bit more work I'd probably buy it. Hang in there~
J-Ray
J-Ray on May 25 '07
Oh the stars do sort of fade out -- they're not boxy. It's just the way I made the preview.. kind of a mistake on my part. Oh well.
orwell
orwell on May 25 '07
i don't think it's boxy. i really like it!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on May 26 '07
Agreed with stars continuing to the bottom of the shirt, and maybe even a lil' spaceship or shooting star, satellites adding little bits to look at in the space void of the rest of the shirt. But fun concept done very well j-Ray. Welcome back.
LaMoo
LaMoo on May 26 '07
I think if you're going with this theme, the moon should look a little more like cheese..



It's a cute idea :)
renfrue
   renfrue on May 26 '07
Cute!
Horst Fantazzini
Horst Fantazzini on May 26 '07
it's cute, but nothing more. 2
sadiesadie
sadiesadie on May 27 '07
Aww I didn't like the design first, but loved it on the shirt somehow :D It's cute! 4!
tw0k1ngs
tw0k1ngs on May 27 '07
Too much moon!
nancyh4300
nancyh4300 on May 28 '07
it is a cute idea but would like to see the mouse peeking out of a pocket on front and main design wrapping around to back.
Bisparulz
   Bisparulz on May 28 '07
hah nice one 5$
iamtenninjas
iamtenninjas on May 28 '07
kinda hard to spot the difference between yellow moon and white mouse
social moth
social moth on May 28 '07
Yes. Moon requires a cheesier finish.
Scupperkat
Scupperkat on May 29 '07
does it have the quote on it? I think it should possibly on the sleeve?

I would totally buy it though!
Kojima
   Kojima on May 29 '07
cute idea. nice colors.
Edword
   Edword on May 30 '07
I almost missed this. nice job!
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