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tabaco

About my design

by tabaco
first design... comments are appreciated :)
teasingtoplease
teasingtoplease on May 23 '07
i don't really get it...
mr_designs
mr_designs on May 23 '07
its like a ship...which rhymes with shit.

hahah



no. but its nice



Bowtie
Bowtie on May 23 '07
Fish accending to heaven: fish funeral on the bowl...



They look like little bombs though so it took me some time to get it.



Don't particularly like it myself, but if you reqork the art (particularly the fish -- make them look like fish, goldfish if you can) I am sure there are a number of people here that would like it.
Bowtie
Bowtie on May 23 '07
reqork = rework.
WalkingAlong
WalkingAlong on May 23 '07
The fish could like more like fish. To me they looked like eggs with arms. Still, very funny.
socialite
socialite on May 23 '07
ahahaha, nice idea but needs to be executed better. the clouds in the squares are distracting, they are a design of their own. imo.
Annie in Wonderland
Annie in Wonderland on May 23 '07
It took me a second to see that they were fish at a fish funeral, but i really like the silhouette.

But wouldn't the attending fish die also? Lack of water and whatnot?
shadow_shrine
shadow_shrine on May 24 '07
copy paste on the clouds
jimmiiko
jimmiiko on May 24 '07
nice bright colors



Jimmy
guzjorge
guzjorge on May 24 '07
this people dont get a thing, the clouds are the tiles of the bathroom, i think its great, the fish shape is stylish, its the best thing otherwise it would lose the cartoony feeling, very well executed, keep it up tabaco, great for a first timer
chopanier
   chopanier on May 24 '07
$$$$$ haha would love to wear this!!
Fedz
Fedz on May 24 '07
Ahahhahahhahaha....loveee it! hahhahahhahaa i would like it more on a black tshirt!!! but its hilarious!!i would buy it!
mlnewco
mlnewco on May 24 '07
I also thought the fish were eggs. The idea is worth a rework & resubmit.
maggie-californication
maggie-californication on May 24 '07
hahahah. this is so funny. love the execution. and the priest fish!!!
imbrilliant.
imbrilliant. on May 24 '07
it took my a little to

see the toilet. it may

just be because i'm

stupid but, rework

the design a little?
bagshotrow
bagshotrow on May 24 '07
I think the fish need a lot of reworking... I thought they were people, and then turds, and then eggs at first. But I love the fact that the clouds are on the bathroom tile. Maybe if you added a toilet paper roll on the wall it would help the reading of both the tile and the toilet (since, I guess, some people had trouble with that?)
amoania
amoania on May 24 '07
the fish need to be orange or something, to distinguish that they are fish...

this is much too confusing as is, but could be AWEsome if re-worked. don't give this idea up.
nanetter
nanetter on May 24 '07
they are fish gathered around a toilet... it looks like a fishy funeral... and the one with the halo is getting carried of into the cloudy unknown... meh... and I still don't like it.
shakethesheets
shakethesheets on May 24 '07
I didn't get that they were fish until I read the comments...
Cantatus
Cantatus on May 25 '07
The idea definitely has a lot of potential, but I agree with those that are saying the fish need more detailing. I'm also not a fan of the background.
tamareeno0
tamareeno0 on May 25 '07
fishes are fun. espically when they are going to fishy heaven.
Georgentosser
Georgentosser on May 26 '07
agree to slightly fishier fish...also, there's something funky about your roman collar and the doshed lines around the fishy ascension..... but these are really just nitpicky. it's fabulous. :]
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on May 26 '07
No need for the fish wathcing the funeral...i think it's just as funny with a single fish (clearly drawn in gold to distinguish it from the background and silhouettes ascending to heaven. Could be a classic if re-done properly.
torrianna
torrianna on May 26 '07
Who says they are fish? I assumed it was a turd funeral. Which is funny to me.
Carolinabelle
Carolinabelle on May 27 '07
yeah that is what I thought to. I think it s funny but slightly crude.
yayforstickers
yayforstickers on May 27 '07
OHHHHHHHHHHH they're fish!! def. didn't get that at all until i read the comments. i still don't really see it, but i guess it's a clever idea if that's what they're supposed to be...



i like the cloud tile background, but this needs a lot of work, and i still don't think i would wear it...
Jemae
   Jemae on May 28 '07
Sweet! =)
ilovetomasb
ilovetomasb on May 29 '07
i thikn the fact that it took me a second to figure out what it was makes the design



its like.. what is that??? zoom in.. thats a toilet! zoom in.. somethings going into heaven.. zoom in.. hey those are fish! OOOH LOL!
selvabullet
selvabullet on May 29 '07
man this is noice!

But i think that you should ditch the broken line on the "light", and leave the gaps between the tiles. That way it'll look more like light and not a road to a cloud.

pie!
drumbendrum
drumbendrum on May 30 '07
too confusing
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