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ahahaha, nice idea but needs to be executed better. the clouds in the squares are distracting, they are a design of their own. imo.
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It took me a second to see that they were fish at a fish funeral, but i really like the silhouette.
But wouldn't the attending fish die also? Lack of water and whatnot? |
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Ahahhahahhahaha....loveee it! hahhahahhahaa i would like it more on a black tshirt!!! but its hilarious!!i would buy it!
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it took my a little to
see the toilet. it may just be because i'm stupid but, rework the design a little? |
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the fish need to be orange or something, to distinguish that they are fish...
this is much too confusing as is, but could be AWEsome if re-worked. don't give this idea up. |
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they are fish gathered around a toilet... it looks like a fishy funeral... and the one with the halo is getting carried of into the cloudy unknown... meh... and I still don't like it.
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The idea definitely has a lot of potential, but I agree with those that are saying the fish need more detailing. I'm also not a fan of the background.
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agree to slightly fishier fish...also, there's something funky about your roman collar and the doshed lines around the fishy ascension..... but these are really just nitpicky. it's fabulous. :]
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man this is noice!
But i think that you should ditch the broken line on the "light", and leave the gaps between the tiles. That way it'll look more like light and not a road to a cloud. pie! |
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