Every Apple Goes Bad Eventually.
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May 23 '07
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i didn't realize this was a guitar at first. maybe you should zoom in on the head area of the guitar or the bottom part where the strings are attached to the body.. can't remember the name of it.
also, you might want to do the strings in silver. |
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They could look more like guitar strings than smiley rectangles (?) Some coils, some shadows. I've never heard of this mnemonic device, so until I read your explanation I had no friggen idea what this was about.
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I would drop the design down to the bottom of the shirt and make it look like a real guitar. Then bring the faces on the strings up to the top.
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I don't know squat about guitars or the mnemonic devices used to teach chords, so honestly, I didn't get this at all. I kept thinking "where's the apple?" As far as the design is concerned, I see the guitar in it now, but I was lost before you explained it. Perhaps the colors and the chopped off feeling of the strings take away from the idea you want to present. Also the white bubbles are kind of distracting. I would agree with Smitty, make this look as much like a guitar as possible to get your point across.
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now, find a guitar teacher that wants to wear it.
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Yeah, cute, but it doesn't'remind me of a guitar...
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extend the strings
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i thought they were the sticks for caramel apples waiting for the apple
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jillustration on May 23 '07 yeah i thought that too. I don't know if everyone would get that reference right away...
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i use Eat All Day Get Big Easy. :]
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I had no idea it was a guitar.
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Elephants and dogs got big ears
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for some reason, i want sushi now.
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not gonna print.
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I like it. I'm sure some guitarists would get it, and it would spark conversation. Why does everything always need to be spelled out?
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MadMike's point about making the strings more real-looking is right on point.
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Also, maybe move the graphic lower on the body to mimic the positioning on a guitar? Just a thought.
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i thought it was
pasta.... sorry. |
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kaloyster on May 24 '07 Ah so that's a good reminder of chord tuning!
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i thought they were chopsticks.
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renfrue on May 24 '07 $5
i'll buy this for a friend fo' sure |
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You're all idiots and you're probably all shit at the guitar too.
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I play guitar everyday, I don't need a mnemonic device to remember 6 letters, I also don't need a tongue depresser shirt
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