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I'm having a problem with the font-- it would look much better if it was hand written, or in something more organic looking.
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Well, I choosed that font because the rest of the drawing is very simply, too, and with the man happens de same... However, maybe you are right...
PD: Sorry for my poor english ^^' |
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I especially like the water on this, it's very well done. All I would change with this design is the man, he's a little too simple compared to the rest of the design.
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You could also put the bottle above the island so it looks more centered on the shirt.
Great design, though. |
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I agree with Javguerre. little bit more detail on the little man. The water is too organic to be beside a stick man.
And i like the positioning, very phalic. |
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