 |
|
|
|
 |
 first submission.
|
 |
BubuSam on May 16 '07 Not a bad idea for the first sub.
|
 |
definitely a good first sub, interesting concept
|
 |
i like this alot
|
 |
ok but the coulors. mmmhm.
|
 |
great style
|
|
there was a rationale behind doing loud colours, but yeah, I think I've changed my mind on that now... oh well. Next design will be better. Thanks for looking.
|
 |
I like the idea and the colors. I just don't like that tie. It takes away from the great artscape of his head and seems to unbalance it.
|
 |
I look forward to your future subs.
|
|
aw, I thought it was off-balance without the tie. Obviously the smart thing would've been to submit it for critique first... well, I'm learning.
thanks all for the helpful feedback. |
 |
i'm not a fan of the hand
|
 |
Damn good 1st sub. I'm likin' it.
|
 |
wooooow
very good very, very good |
 |
i really really like this one.
the way you made the eyes is my favorite. however, i'm not sure the hand fits perfectly; it looks like part of the design but it's hanging off of the design if you know what i mean? i would like it better if you had just the head and etc. without the hand. nice job though =] $4 |
 |
kennybanzai on May 16 '07 Move to the country.
There are trees still growing there nice drawing styly. |
 |
dope
|
 |
i'm liking the escher-ness of the buildings.
|
 |
i like it a lot, but two fingers are better than one...
|
 |
dope art. not sure if I would wear it though.
|
 |
Great jarb! Looks good!
|
 |
Real artistic.
I like it. :] Good luck with future submissions! |
 |
FRICKINAWESOME on May 18 '07 I'd almost like it straight down the middle of the tee like a tie. Or on the back. Or as is. however they wanna print this, ill take it.
|
 |
FRIGGIN AMAZING. AMAZING. Cant wait to see the other colors
|
 |
love it!!!!!
but i would consider changing the green... |
 |
Edword on May 18 '07 nice job!
|
|
Great first sub; tweek the colors and lose the tie though, it's too much (which I understand is the point). If you do lose the tie, consider fiddling with the placement.
|
 |
cool
|
 |
Great image, but the tie bothers me, I feel it takes away from the rest, which is wonderful. I understand the balance issue, becuase of the placement, but harsh contrasting colors of the tie draw my eyes from the head and point of the shirt.
|
|
I think if you moved the main part of the design lower, to sit on the rib cage, then just have the tie go off the bottom of the tee, it would work out better. Just don't like the way it sits up on the shoulder making it seem off balance. Amazing first design, keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your designs.
|
 |
Jemae on May 21 '07 Nice illus style! =)
|
|
Jemae on May 21 '07 5$! =)
|
 |
amazinggg
|
|
yeah, no tie. otherwise great style!
|
 |
like the illustration style
|
 |
Yeah. Keep the tie. Keep the hand, since it shows the stress of the overcrowded-ness. Maybe make the hand sort of fade in from the background the way the eyes fade out? I like the angle and length of the design and the tie...the eyes are a bit dark...I would totally wear it.
|
|
not a fan of the tie.
|
© 2009, a skinnyCorp LLC company. All designs copyright by owner.
