normally I'm a text advocate in opposition to the "loose the text" zombies out here.
However your text is making this shirt job specific. As such you're limiting the amount of people who can attune to it. If you lost the text it's open to interpretation and as such more likely to be taken in.
My first thought before reading the text was the idea of being a "web slinger" in terms of "internet savvy". Once i read the text it stole that connection from me.
This made me laugh. It's clever, and I like the idea, but you could have 'developed' it more. the glasses don't look like they belong on the guy's face, and I'm still just bored with silhouettes. Especially black ones on a white shirt.
warrent
I revised my previous version to improve the tag line and add a back image.
WEB DEVELOPERS
MAKING THE NET A SAFER PLACE
Syrasha
I do like the spider mouse on the back. I think that's neat.
Cold Collards
neat concept.
tempo36
I'm not big on slogan shirts...but if there was a shirt that just had the design from the back on it I'd buy it. I love the mouse-spider.
grypesagon
normally I'm a text advocate in opposition to the "loose the text" zombies out here.
However your text is making this shirt job specific. As such you're limiting the amount of people who can attune to it. If you lost the text it's open to interpretation and as such more likely to be taken in.
My first thought before reading the text was the idea of being a "web slinger" in terms of "internet savvy". Once i read the text it stole that connection from me.
Just saying.
zipperking
looks like you could buy it at a convention or something
MrDomino
Don't web developers make Flash ads? I don't like Flash.
madmike
This made me laugh. It's clever, and I like the idea, but you could have 'developed' it more. the glasses don't look like they belong on the guy's face, and I'm still just bored with silhouettes. Especially black ones on a white shirt.
madruga
very clever! I'd use it if I were a web designer
Captain Global
Please offer a color other than white.
KIFIKA
5$ love it, specially since i am a web developer :] i need one of these for school
keliblonde
DEVELOPERSDEVELOPERSDEVELOPERS!
hubavai
looks like a companys' promo shirt....
kaloyster
Goddammit I was about to make one with the same concept.
Well I think I still should proceed.
Jemae
Genius! 5$! =)
Sandwichwarrior
i'd re-name it, Right now its too specific and probably wont sell well.
daidara
great idea dude!!!i love it
javguerre
the foot and the hand shooting the web merge in an awkward way. but its a great concept, for sure
Randychico
Yeah, I'd lose the slogan, then I'd be really into it.
SEVEN-HUNDRED
I also gotta say - lose the text
The outline of Spidey with glasses makes for an awesome image
And the Spider-Mouse is very cool too
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