Urban Kit
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Submitted on:
May 18 '07
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1.28 from 613 votes
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I think if you used the grey from the knife in the pop outs to make it more clear that the objects are part of the knife, it would help.
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poor design
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It's a good design - but how many people want to walk around with a condom on their shirt?
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why is the text half in English and half in French?
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UNIVERSEISSCARYSHOCKEDCAT
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replace the condom and you've got something.
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Hi, thanks for your comment.
You're ideas are not to bad. The title is only in french because I'm french, you may read URBAN instead URBAIN. Unfortunatly condom is part of our life and it may save it. I understand that it could be a little bit shocking but .... Thanks a lot !!!! |
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I think this is too sketchy - with a concept this complicated/subtle, the design needs to be very slick and clear.
Good concept though - see if you could add more things to the Swiss Army Knife - if you submit this design to the Critique section, you should get some feedback on other things you could include. |
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i like your concept, but second 13. it should almost look like a product advertisement. like it's half -way serious, but totally not. ya know
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"non attractive design" what's that? it's a critique! give me advice on why you don't like, not just that you don't like it. i don't care IF you like or not, i care WHY you like it or not. please be more helpful next time you post something. thank you.
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