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May 14 '07
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insanedoodle58

About my design

by insanedoodle58
First submission, hopefully I did this right.



Done for my Graphic Design class, and, well, hopefully this goes well. Haha.
Kublai Khan
Kublai Khan on May 14 '07
That's pretty awesome... I'd like a few more colours, looks way too monochromatic right now. More detail would be nice too... still a 4 from me, though
mj00
   mj00 on May 14 '07
This is weird in that it is *almost* symmetrical. I would advise you to make it fully symmetrical. Also, consider making the suckers on each limb larger and bolder. I'm kind of confused by that shape in the background, it feels like it should be more water-like or reference marine life in some way (an anchor?).
cronobeaker
   cronobeaker on May 14 '07
Definately lives up to it's title, I think it needs to offer something a little more to warrant a purchase. Give it another go:)
TashaFace
TashaFace on May 14 '07
OMFG!
Ikarusmyancestor
Ikarusmyancestor on May 14 '07
On WHite.
0Jim0
   0Jim0 on May 14 '07
smaller
12monkeys
12monkeys on May 14 '07
there's eight tentacles... what are those two extra nubs that appear to be holding the shape?
crazymonkeyness
crazymonkeyness on May 14 '07
wow. lol... pretty good
insanedoodle58
insanedoodle58 on May 14 '07
in response to 12monkeys:



it's the end of the tentacles wrapping around the shape.



otherwise, thanks for the comments and votes!
Jasper Cockelles
Jasper Cockelles on May 15 '07
I think this is awesome, love the fact it's not symmetrical and love the monochromatic look. $5
KidMoxie
KidMoxie on May 15 '07
It's like it's peering into my soul!
Andorra
Andorra on May 15 '07
I like it not symmetrical. symmetrical things bug me.

if you work on it a bit and add more detail then it will have a better chance.
thatchick
thatchick on May 15 '07
i really like this one

it's not too cute but not sinister either

that's rare

$5
DiveBarHottie
DiveBarHottie on May 15 '07
So the shape behind the octopus is the Smirnoff Vodka emblem...
Mammoth82
Mammoth82 on May 15 '07
Nice, but on the white that little bit on the bottom...um...maybe not
rbz
rbz on May 16 '07
I changed my mind about 4 timese then decided I would definantly buy this!!! $5
Captain Global
Captain Global on May 16 '07
Please get rid of the background image.
eloquacious
eloquacious on May 17 '07
AAAAH.
wishingforaleonidas
wishingforaleonidas on May 18 '07
not sure but i think i've seen a design quite similar to this before...
Lauralie
Lauralie on May 19 '07
i wouldn't buy this myself, but know those who would. based on what other people have already said about the backround image, and me feeling there's just something missing, i give it a 3. good feedback for a first sub! I hope to get the same. :)
pointman323
pointman323 on May 19 '07
sweet kid, i'd get it
dirtymonk
dirtymonk on May 19 '07
I know everyones going to hate this and say I am dumb, immature, perverted ect. but I find the design rather phallic. Notice how I made this statment without being tastless or making a dirty joke. overall I do like it though and would like to see it resubmitted with some of the suggested changes, but as of now I wouldn't feel comfortable wearing it at my job (summer camp with many children) and that's the place I would look forward to wearing it the most
GreenWhimsy
GreenWhimsy on May 19 '07
This would be very neat in some bright, wild colors! As it is, the black and white is making it sit back and seem boring (which it is not), rather than complementing the design.
pointman323
pointman323 on May 20 '07
have you ever seen a penis?
jsb
jsb on May 20 '07
it throws me off that everything is symmetrical except the eyes.

but well done.
MDIZZEE
MDIZZEE on May 20 '07
i am toilet and i gave it a 5 and uhhh other stuff like that. hope it wins man.
spamicus
spamicus on May 20 '07
very veruca alt/eight arms to hold you, complete with dots around the arms, but i like it.
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