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thanks for the feedback so far, and no, like I said before, that is a small wooden toy dagger in his hand. Why would I draw a penis in his hand?
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well it currently looks like a penis, so maybe if you had it pointing more one way so you can see the side of it
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def looks like a p-nis
me likes the olde won better i wuz gunna scor dis but den i hadda order uh pizzuh fo sho |
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I didn't like it before. I still don't like it now. In fact I like it less because you resubmitted it. There is a critique section with a mechanism for updates and feedback.
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You need to draw the white of the trees' faces out into the picture more, otherwise it looks like they're just floating out there, and it's not visually effective.
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i actually like the forest on the other one better. but i like the details on the tree branches on this one.
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Thanks for all of the comments so far, so here is a link to my newest crit, please, please check it out and let me know what to fix.
http://threadless.com/critique/220517/The_Princess_and_the_Pea |
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