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Into the Woods RESUBMIT by Smitty McGillicutty

Scoring finished:

512 days ago

Submitted on:

May 11 '07

Scored by:

2,449 people

Comments:

57 comments

Final average score:

1.79 out of 5

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ok, so I fixed the forest, but I got a little out of hand so I might have over done it. Let me know what you think.

murgles on May 11 '07

Ninja? Oooh barracuda! This one is cute too, I liked the other also. $5!

freaksgeeks on May 11 '07

Interesting, but I really wouldn't wear it.

Captain Global on May 11 '07

The eyes creep me out.

shawnoc on May 11 '07

I like the forest the way it was. I guess you can't please everyone.

Junk-wa on May 11 '07

eh the white throws me off

Bisparulz on May 11 '07

nice colors 5$

eric_with_a_k on May 11 '07

Why is the little boy holding a penis?

ChunderMan on May 11 '07

I don't mind the white. But I don't like the stroke around it for some reason.

gredd on May 11 '07

I liked the last version better, but I still like.

karenlynn79 on May 11 '07

i like this even though i might avoid camping for a while.....

chelly on May 11 '07

MUCH MUCH better

uckymush on May 11 '07

I liked the other one a lot, and I like this one even more.

Cold Collards on May 11 '07

Still like this design. 5

iDanSimpson on May 11 '07

i suppose i like the old one more. this one's more about the forest and less about the kids

designer84 on May 11 '07

I don't think i would wear this, but you gotta love the facial expression.. Priceless! :)

OrangeRadioKitty on May 11 '07

I liked the placement of the other one better and how there were more openings in the trees so that the background showed through more. However I really like the tree on the left with his hands over Hansel's head!

antosh on May 11 '07

Beautifull drawn trees!!! and composition

Im not polonesian on May 11 '07

is that a penis in hansel's hand?

Smitty McGillicutty on May 11 '07

thanks for the feedback so far, and no, like I said before, that is a small wooden toy dagger in his hand. Why would I draw a penis in his hand?

grandviewbobcats on May 11 '07

well it currently looks like a penis, so maybe if you had it pointing more one way so you can see the side of it

dr. loopy94 on May 11 '07

the old one was better

BobbyAnderson on May 11 '07

def looks like a p-nis
me likes the olde won better
i wuz gunna scor dis but den i hadda order uh pizzuh
fo sho

comical morbidity on May 11 '07

dagger looks like penis. old one was better.

JELLYTANK on May 12 '07

I like the illustration but not the colors.

numbb on May 12 '07

whoa hey our current school play is called into the woods. and it's like right now. how weird.

The Wee Straggler on May 12 '07

The white on the trees. I don't like.

1. Distracting from the main image of the children
2. The white makes it look like the trees are lit from some unseen inconsistent light source.

And yes, the toy sword is confusing.

renfrew on May 12 '07

I didn't like it before. I still don't like it now. In fact I like it less because you resubmitted it. There is a critique section with a mechanism for updates and feedback.

Poisoned Apparel on May 12 '07

You need to draw the white of the trees' faces out into the picture more, otherwise it looks like they're just floating out there, and it's not visually effective.

soblondeitskary on May 12 '07

maybe he ripped off a finger of the girls hand he's holding.
same color.

Digdag88 on May 12 '07

mm i don't really like it this time, but i liked it last time

TreeFiddy on May 12 '07

i like it better this way

SwallowedAFallingStar on May 12 '07

i actually like the forest on the other one better. but i like the details on the tree branches on this one.

She's Fake on May 12 '07

As art, I like it.
But I probably wouldn't wear it. $4 anyway, since that is pretty tight.

She's Fake on May 12 '07

As art, I like it.
But I probably wouldn't wear it. $4 anyway, since that is pretty tight.

Low Digital on May 12 '07

Don't listen to all of these uptight critics. $5

FRICKINAWESOME on May 13 '07

I liked the design when it was more about the goofy looking meth-freak hansel and gretal and not about the scary trees. I think you jsut got over-paranoid from all the people coming down so hard on you from the lifted forest design that you took it to the extreme here...i like the trees you added, so just leave the white glints and away the tree faces. Still very nice tho.

Petanca on May 13 '07

OMG scary eyes! but cools characters!

dhasberry on May 13 '07

I agree with FrickinAwesome. The other one was good and people came down too hard on you. Good job.

katv8splash on May 13 '07

its weird

wotto on May 13 '07

creepy eyes

proque007 on May 14 '07

kinda scarry ^^

herekittykitty on May 14 '07

this is pretty weird.

applegary on May 14 '07

I LIKE creepy eyes! I HAVE creepy eyes! Nice jarb!

Bowtie on May 14 '07

Oh, please fix his "dagger", seriously he would be better empty-handed. Other than that I love it.

susie q89 on May 15 '07

looks a lot like a penis to me as well.

Mikko Terva on May 15 '07

delightfully weird.

therecouldbenothingafterThis on May 15 '07

well done. i love it! better than the original. :-) $5 again.

iforgot on May 15 '07

I totally love the forest, but I'm not loving the kids.
They're pretty ugly.

iforgot on May 15 '07

Oh, and I also am wondering what the little boy is holding...?

Captain Tetanus on May 15 '07

interestingly creepy and unpleasant

Smitty McGillicutty on May 16 '07

Thanks for all of the comments so far, so here is a link to my newest crit, please, please check it out and let me know what to fix.

http://threadless.com/critique/220517/The_Princess_and_the_Pea