Shhhh!! I am trying to live here.
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1845 days ago
Submitted on:
May 10 '07
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17 comments
Average score:
1.65 from 663 votes
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I like the concept, mayb you could find another way to make the legs end, it is kind of awkward and abrupt, but definitely resub.
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yeh. i love the idea, but those legs look a lil too much like broken popsicle sticks. they need to blend better.
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I agree with the above comments. Maybe show the man's torso. Right now it looks like his body was eaten. I love the rest of the design and the idea. Please re-submit it if this one doesn't make it on through.
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thank you for you comments so far ,i will take them on board very seriously. my skills are not that great on the comp yet, but i was trying to show that is all people really see when they are sleeping on the pavement is our legs.
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Yeah i like the concept aswel, how the legs end does catch your eye, it differs from the rest which is more smooth and flowing, but it adds to its appeal for me anyway.
Great work and looking foward to seeing more |
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You don't have many options when it comes to cutting off the legs. I've run into this problem before.
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It almost looks as if the legs have just trod across the figure sleeping on the sidewalk, which is a statement in itself...
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Did StrongSad get kicked to the curb?
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Looks Great! Can i only purchase one if it wins?
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Poor little Pillsbury Dough Boy... a victim of the low-carb movement...
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That's cute. You should put more legs.
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This concept is killer, theres a lot of thought behind it. But I'm going to say something about the legs too, it's just a really jagged and unpleasant end to them is all, if they where cut off with the circle that might work.
Great first Sub though. Keep up the good work. |
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I dig it!
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Hi Guantlet, i like it!
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Congrats on your first sub. I agree with the feedback on the legs, I thought they were broken matchsticks at first. I like the design and I appreciate the message, but I think the execution could use some work. Good luck with your future subs.
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i love it cept for the legs... maybe if you had them end with the edge of the pavement, like it's kind of framing the image? just not jagged and disembodied looking...
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