This is an old school video gamer's DREAM! I like the illustration lots and think it would be better if the layout was randomly mixed on the shirt. We don't really NEED it to go in a straight line, besides- the edges are too close to the pit seam. Also, that layout would mean you could blow up the tombstones to better show off your awesome details. 4
I like what you are going for, but i think it could be improved even more with a big vine-covered sign overhead that states this is a "Game Over Graveyard", but that's just me i guess. Very nice selections and coloring which still scores a respectable 3 from me.
I like the famicom... it's a nice touch. but I really don't think too many other people realize what it is... unless it's one of the newer released systems that play the old nes games... sorry i work at gamestop. I do this stuff for a living :P
About my design
This is where they go during the game over.
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